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Xhoral1865
Hi, I'm Xhoral. I attempt to write stories. Wish me luck!
Xhoral1865
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Not bad, overall pretty well written.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
The end felt rushed but other than that it was well written.
LOVED IT!
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Yeah, I had to rush it because I the due date was today and I had to finish it. Sorry about that.
Funny!
Twi just bosses Cryssi around like she's a little toddler, and I freakin' love it.
Not bad, not bad at all.
What? You're leaving Chrysalis' mandatory punishment body to my imagination? But my imagination sucks at these things... Ugh... Chryssi must be Button Mash for two months.
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
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I haven't and I really don't want to since it's most likely that it won't be accepted. I've heard from a lot of different people that the mods there are assholes and if that's really the case then my story won't be accepted due to me putting a comma in the wrong place.
Some cute moments
It was okay. The only thing that got to me was that the relationship between Twilight and Chrysalis was like a mother and child. Kinda weird. I mean, isn't one of them a queen and all? I'm all right for Chrysie being a roommate, but that didn't feel quite right.