One of these days we'll form a union, and get the fair and equitable treatment we deserve. Then we'll go too far, and become corrupt and shiftless, and the Japonies will eat us alive.
Ruling the peaceful land of Equestria isn't all invasions and battles with demi-gods, most days it's a pretty boring gig... especially when you've been doing it for over two-thousand years. Can a visit from Shining Armor, newly crowned co-ruler of the Crystal Empire, spice things up? Or will Celestia get more entertainment than she's bargained for?
A request by my friend Magello for a story about an old sketch of his!
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Whaaat? No actual princess throwing? I was so sure he would have given his fan a quick live demonstration of his famous princess throw with using Celestia as Cady's substitute. Well, maybe it's better this way, it's not smart to try her patience too much.
A small thing, but this line here is a bit awkward, with a suggested fix in bold:
“I commissionED a painting from Chiaroscuro for you,” Shining Armor said. “It’s just a little gift from my Empire to your Kingdom – a sign of respect and thanks for always being there for us.”
I look forward to seeing your next piece of pony prose!
That was pretty hilarious. Shining is such a dork, and he had an entire Empire of ponies egging him on.
5206946 Do you want to snap Shining Armor's spine?
This story is awesome. I would love to see if Shining acts this way when Cadance is around, or if she thinks it's cute. I can definitely understand the Crystal ponies being conditioned to follow a charismatic unicorn stallion warrior. I wish this fic would keep going, and show us Celestia telling him off.
So if Aladdin was a pony and did an entire mountain of drugs this is what it would have looked like.
This feels like the best kind of story to go with a Magello pic. Utterly insane and hilarious.
As delightfully dumb as that other story was ludicrously perfect.