Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are marefriends, but, when something goes wrong one night, both ponies must face the consequences. Some would say that Fluttershy suffered more, but, is that really true?
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2006midnight
I am a girl who got into My Little Pony Friendship is Magic 7 years ago. And I've finally decided to try and write fanfics, so...yeah. That's about it. If you ever want to talk feel free to PM me.
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Aw.
6197595 Sorry
6197597
You don't need to apologise for beautiful writing.
6197599 Heh, okay.
6197602
Your cover arts are always lovely, too.
6197616 Thanks
6197618
You're welcome.
Damn. You. THESE TEARS AREN'T MANLY TEARS.
6200089 Eheh, um, sorry?
6200095
It was really good, I just wasn't prepared for the feelings.
6200105 Ah, okay. Well, thank you.
That made sad.
6200911 It's supposed to be sad.
6201086 Sorry
6200950 Yes it was and did a very good job at it. Oh I still like the story. Most of the "sad" stories do not make sad. So it was a good story to me for making me sad.(squee)
6201102 Oh, okay then. Thanks
6201143 Yeah, no. I never rewrite or edit anything I do. Sorry.
6201196 I don't write for other people. And you, my dear, can take your shit somewhere else. I don't want to hear it.
6201308 I post it online so that people can read it if they so choose. But I have never sat down and written something just for the purpose of doing it for people. Believe me or not, I don't really care, because I know what's true and what isn't.
6201412 For one thing, I'm female. And yes, I most definitely do know better than you. You've certainly not shown yourself to be anything more than an idiot looking for people to spew your bullshit to.
6201686 I'm 22. The 2006 is a reference to my little cousin who saved my life once.
6201707 Never said being female meant anything. I just hate being referred to as 'man'. I never used the words "more mature" either. You're the one reading a bunch of bullshit things into what I say.
6202217 I have nothing against advice. My problem is with assholes like you.
6202247
Keep it that way honey, if it makes you feel better. 
I am intrigued by these comments but wary at the same time.
Should I read or not?
I dont usually read tragedies (way too sensitive for most of them) but should I make an exception here?
Help me
6204799 Uh, well, if you're sensitive to death, then maybe not, but if you like sad sort of romance then you could try it. It's not really up to me what you do. I don't want to force you or anything.
This felt far far too rushed. We have no information or emotions attached to Rainbow Dash's and Fluttershy's relationship. We only get the fight second hand, and it's barely mentioned. The search and funeral are similarly really brief. There is no time given to show the depth of Rainbow's feelings, Fluttershy's reasons for the fight, the horror and fear of searching for a missing Fluttershy, the suffering of being too late to save her, or the mourning of losing her.
6211304 Okay, thanks for the feedback.