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2006midnight


I am a girl who got into My Little Pony Friendship is Magic 7 years ago. And I've finally decided to try and write fanfics, so...yeah. That's about it. If you ever want to talk feel free to PM me.

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Twilight Sparkle is dying and Celestia is near a shell of her former self. Her biggest regret is having been unable to say goodbye, so she asked that Luna deliver a message for her. When Luna tries to do so, she finds something much different than what either sister could have ever imagined.


This story is a tribute to DemonFyre who passed away this past week.
The world was not meant for one as beautiful as you. - HudsonHawk.

Though I never knew you and I now never will, know that you hold a special place in my heart. Let sweet oblivion ease your aches and sorrows.
Sleep well, little one. - Swiss Alien Narwhal.

I don't know who you were, but you were clearly a great inspiration. I hope you made your life worth living, and that you know that thanks to stories like this one, there will always be a way for people to remember you. - Leonexus.

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Comments ( 23 )

D8 SOOOO SAD D,,,: :fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

Though I never knew you and I now never will, know that you hold a special place in my heart. Let sweet oblivion ease your aches and sorrows.

Sleep well, little one.

I'm not the best with words, but I feel like I should type something, and it may end up longer than intended.

I don't know who you were, but you were clearly a great inspiration. I hope you made your life worth living, and that you know that thanks to stories like this one, there will always be a way for people to remember you.

Huh, the way you used that last line... it really feels like that line came first and the rest of the fic was built to give it context. I don't mean to diminish the rest of the story, but it just gives off that kind of vibe, at least to me.

5605726 It didn't happen that way....I'm sorry it felt like that to you....

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5605709 I'll add both of those when I'm not on my phone....

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Please don't mistake it for a complaint, the line just feels different. Through the rest of the fic you have a very literal description of places and events, but then for that last line you jump to a more poetic style. It's not inherently out-of-place, especially considering its context in the moment, but there's just a sort of a shift there.

5606035 My usual style is more poetic than this story, so...that might be why...

I can't think of anything worthwhile to say, I'm sorry. I mean, don't get me wrong, I loved the story - as usual - but it sucks that the reason it exists is because someone died. :pinkiesad2:

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I wish I'd known her.

5607684 She was a wonderful friend...

Thank you... this was beautiful, especially a beautiful tribute to Foxy... she was my friend...
This is beautiful :pinkiesad2:

5773511 Thanks......it wasn't really that good, but....thanks.....

5773701 It was. It was beautiful

OMG! SO SAD BUT SO GOOD!:raritycry:

As this story proves it can never be to late to tell someone how you feel. Celestia is going to be heart broken but she will be happy that her message was able to be sent.

7170054 Yeah, that's the feeling I was going for. Sort of a bittersweet sadness.

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