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Bon Bon has been going through a bad relationship, and it is up to Lyra to comfort her. However, she seems to be missing.

My first intentionally short story, with some unintentional similarities to my other story "In Times of War".

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Prince_Staghorn

Prince_Staghorn #1 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

Frankly, this is just an overall good story

Th4ack

Th4ack #2 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

5155351 Thanks for the compliment!

Prince_Staghorn

Prince_Staghorn #3 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

5155390 What can I say? I couldn't find anything wrong with it

Of course, most of your criticisms are likely to NOT be constructive, and from LyraXBon bon shippers

Commissar Derpy Hooves

Commissar Derpy Hooves #4 · Oct 20th, 2014 · · ·

Bon bon is a killer I put my unusual hat on it.

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