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lunabrony


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Mini-Featured on 10/7/2014!

Lunabrony returns!

Rainbow Dash discovers she's not the fastest being in Equestria, and immediately sets out to correct the error... if she can catch it, that is.

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Spacecowboy
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This is how you do it. God, my sides cracked up when I saw those classic two words. Well done.

XD I think I saw a Spongebob Reference there.

I don't suppose Wile E Coyote eats pony?

No way she catches that bird

I half expected "the blue blur"-Sonic the Hedgehog based on the title (who has run faster than the speed of light in his comics and landed in parallel dimensions).

Still, this I gotta see.

5097628 sonic the hedge hog had comics……… well I give up on life

5097695 it's in the Guiness world record book as the "longest running video game based comic series" and it's still going today.

Personally, I find the comic to be much more serious and even....darker...than the games.

5097716 A grim dark sonic? Now I've heard everything.

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Not all the time. He's still a hedgehog version of Rainbow Dash, but there are dark themes.

Death, betrayal, working to overthrow the rein of a madman, and sacrifice.

The bird looked right at her through the mirror, as if it new it was being watched, and stuck its tongue out at her.

"Knew."

Oh, dammit, what you do to me. I hated Bugs Bunny. I hated Tweety. And I hated the Road Runner. But this story intrigues me. And I can just see Rainbow Dash failing just as epically as my hero, Wile E. Coyote. The implications of that tickles me to no end.

I shall like and favorite.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

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In one of the still frames, his scientific name appears as "Eatibus Anythingus"
So I'd assume yes. Especially since ponies are easier to catch.

Great beginning. I just hope you can keep up wit the chase scene writing. They are hard to do. Good luck! :pinkiehappy:

5096826 As much as I appreciate honest criticism, on the opposite side of the spectrum I love comments like this as well. Makes me happy. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

What is this a crossover of?

5100755 Good ol' cartoons. I'll add an authors note.

I don't Dash is aware that one can not catch Roadrunner.

Oh god, this can only end well.

If Rainbow Dash thought freaking Pinkie Pie abused cartoon physics too much for her to handle, she's in for a lot of fun.

Rainbow should have brought Fluttershy. All she'd have to do to catch the road runner is say, "Excuse me." It has been shown to be polite, amongst its other qualities.

5106243 I have specific reasons I chose the three I did. Those reasons will play out soon enough.

Sorry, I had to ditch Fluttershy

Going critter hunting without your critter expert? Yeah, I agree with Tatsurou; this'll end well.

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But then where would the story go? For this kind of stuff, the more incompetent the cast is, the more enjoyable will everything end up being!

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I'm not saying that that's the direction the story should have gone. I'm saying it was rather stupid of Rainbow not to think of that, all things considered.

Although I now have a mental image of Twilight and Pinkie co-founding ACME...which explains so much.

"Easy," Rainbow said. "With science."

Oh, dear Celestia, she is about to science.

She shrieked suddenly, at a decibel level slightly above that of the engine of a rocket engine and her words pouring out just a tad slower than Mach 2.

Repetition and a number.

"Since May 10th,"

Number again.

Also, Rainbow Dash asked Pinkie to meet her in a completely different place than in which she asked Twilight to meet her. Yet they both ended up in the same place. Weird, huh?

Other than that the story seems to be becoming more zany. I look forward to the next chapter.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

5107857 Roadrunner thrives on zany. Everything seems to be in order.

5107857 Also, Rainbow Dash asked Pinkie to meet her in a completely different place than in which she asked Twilight to meet her. Yet they both ended up in the same place. Weird, huh?

Can you elaborate on this? I might be able to fix it.

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Tank's note had been urgent, instructing her to meet Rainbow Dash at the library. She could only have meant the smaller library that hardly anypony used, although business had certainly picked up following the Golden Oak Library incident. Pinkie arrived at the smaller library in record time...

Twilight opened the card, her eyes lighting up as she read its contents.

I need help studying, will you teach me? Meet me at the back of the abandoned rainbow factory. R.D.

I hope this is helpful.

One thing that needs to be known, coyotes are faster than roadrunners by a good margin. Our childhood was a lie! XD

Still, good story.

I need ponies who can think fast and run faster, and Fluttershy's a great friend, but she's only got 2.5 wing power!"

"Actually she's got 2.3,"

Numbers again.

Rainbow Dash stared at her. ",.."

There is a comma in your ellipses.

Self deprecating humor, funny.

So enters the ugliest looking roadrunner/ostrich in all of Warner Brothers. What mishaps and, ultimately, excruciating pain await Rainbow Dash?

KBO.:twilightsmile:

5112232 I fixed the other ones but I'm not gonna write "two point five" it just looks... odd.

BwahahahHahahahahahauauHahhahAhHa!!!

5112243 By jove, I think he liked it!

5112733 He very much did!

A (think) trail of colored light [thick] ?

And -I- am all about cool.

Maybe italicizing would be better than whatever this is.

Fluttershy had been understandably concerned with Dash, well, dashed off so quickly, explaining only that it was an emergency and would make it up to her.

"When," maybe?

"Cease your worrying and lets do something fun instead."

Fluttershy's eyes widened. "Like... what?" She asked whereupon Discord unveiled a small red box and shook it, multiple items rattling inside. He cracked the box open over the table, and several dice rolled out amidst sheets of paper.

"Yahtzee!" Discord announced.

"Let's." Also:

It was in the midst of their game, the game, which might be noted, that Fluttershy was losing quite terribly at it, that there came a frantic knocking at the door.

This "it" is superfluous.

He had either found or summoned an old film projector, and aimed it at a white sheet hanging on the far wall. Fluttershy knew she did not normally put her sheets on the walls...

The girls squealed with joy as the blanket lit up with a crackling, grainy black and white screen.

Is it a sheet or a blanket?

You have a story about Button Mash inside of a story about the Cutie Mark Crusaders inside of a story about Rainbow Dash and the Road Runner. Congratulations, your story has unlocked the Turducken achievement.:rainbowlaugh::yay::scootangel:

KBO.:twilightsmile:

Because blue is associated with speed?:applejackunsure:

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I will now only ever use that image when responding to a comment pointing out an error in my story.

I'm not sure if I should thank you, or curse you.

Outrunicus Dashicus?

...OR...

Acceleratii Incredibus
Velocitus Tremenjus
Burnius-Roadibus
Disappearialis Quickius

I eagerly look forward to seeing what the others get.
Spectrii Accelerus?
Shimmerus Expensivii?
Pointedia Bookus Studii?
Alcoholii Fruiticus?
Invisibus Nervous Rex?

:rainbowlaugh:

5123349 My job is done. I must go now, my people need me.

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To unlock Turducken, wouldn't it need to be a story about Scootaloo (or CMC, I guess) inside of a story about Dashie inside of a story about Sunbutt?

5130902 It's not a story about the CMC, it's just a brief glimpse at what's happening at Fluttershy's :ajsleepy:

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The joke here is that Scootaloo is a chicken, Rainbow Dash is the duck, and Sunbutt is a turkey. Your actual story has zero bearing upon the theoretical one for the joke.
:derpytongue2:

5100852 Roadrunner- fuck sonic, nothin catches roadrunner, be it fucking discord or Q, nothing can.

"Meep, meep!" It challenged, then zoomed off again.

Oh, my. Such vile language. :trollestia:

I was hoping for a Sonic crossover, but I suppose there are already plenty of those.

5288693 I refuse to write a Sonic crossover. It's saturated and overdone, and I guarantee will be insta-disliked to eternity

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