A human is transported to Equestria. But he plans to live there on HIS terms.
He will not be turned into a pony.
He will not be confined to just one town.
He will not submit to become a vegetarian.
He WILL try to live there peacefully.
But some don't want that.
In this story he deals with racism,and stereotypes. (And yes he is black.)
Note(personal): Okay I am rewriting everything. I stopped because I simply didn’t plan well and I didn’t enjoy forcing myself to write. But it’s you guys who made me come back I kept seeing people fav or add my story to a library even It was obvious that I haven’t added a chapter in a year soooooo here it is. Note in a note: Writing on my own time biotch!
Chapters (1)
Not much changed... but still as good as ever
6245124 The frist few chaps were okay. I just did a little tweaking. It was the later ones that made me want to kill myself
will this rewrite have a vampire in it for no reason? I think it was this fic that had discord just make a vampire apart of everything for no reason at all, and it made me want to just stop reading.
too much shit on my list to keep track of anymore.
Stupid Celestia, thats just One human!Who knows how more violent ones will react !
6245552 nope fortunately. That was so embarrassing
6245774 s'all good bro. everybody has cringe moments, least the vampire thing can be rectified. good luck on the rewrite.
Yay, you've come back.
"1 week later"
"I have read a total of 10 stories"
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Mfw only ten
Despite not liking humans just rolling over and being fate's plaything, your oc rolled over pretty quick! Play it cool, listen to their demands, then when the time is right, get out of dodge faster than Ruby Rose eating a plateof ccookies!
Then there's no time then? If you're writing on your own time? *Looking At Date Of Upload* Of course after reading it I don't care now. Won't roll over? He submitted to them right off the bat without even a fight.
Okay, glad this has been abandoned. Frigging beta males...
Bruh. I am so surprised at how well logiced this was. Most actually that bit on
“Take him to one of the guest bedrooms, and stand guard at his door.” She ordered. She then turned to me. “Please do not leave without a guard shadowing you. Also I would like for you to join us at dinner later on.” She said.
Means alot. Most skip that and it just happens in those stories.
its great to see this, since so many just have that occur without Celestia telling that human. We just accept it too easily, but being told would make trusting it easier. Thats a important detail, a normal human IF NOT TOLD ABOUT IT, would get at least miffed. Sure they understand it, but the Princess just does it without TELLING THEM about that? NEEDing a guard to tail them in the Castle, and such? ANYONE should at least be annoyed that they were forced into having guards, and put into this situation. But at least being told to your face, its easier to accept and understand. Since they obviously know nothing about you. You could suspect Celestia, and Luna. But at most they may know about humans in some way.
Since the Multiverse is vast. That possibility that Humans existed at somepoint on Equis is possible even if we went extinct sometime. It could be pre-unification when they just ascended as Alicorns. They knew about humans. Or were with Starswirl to use a spell to send us to Earth? Like the Sirens in the Movie, being tossed though a portal to the Human Equestria, from the Movies. Similar timing, possibly earlier. Giving Starswirl time to perfect the Spell by the time be fought the Sirens actually... or vise versa. Where he uses the Spell against the Sirens first, thus low range so similar Universe/Pocket-Verse. While Against Humanity, the spell was perfected and thus used to go Further Away in the Multiverse, and thusly be so Magic deprived? While we have that History Knowlage of the World, we became less magic dependent as time and generations past. Thus less Neanderthal like? Its a idea at least
But seriously you got me SO REINVESTED!!!
Makes me sad to remember this stopped like so long ago
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But seriously, I plan to write myself. I bringin back Blacklight Evolved from Prototype, and having a MainCharacter whos me, as I travel gaining powers and Magic, then "Evolve" the world, as eventually they get strong from some sources of DNA 😉 (Spoiler is cus i was typing something only relevant to me lol, was about the story im writing. Its gonna take me a while honestly, but i plan to do by best)
Currently using this new energy to read more from here(FimFiction), and see what I missed. As i give writing another chance!
Wish me luck!