Aspiring Weapon designer, and has a soft spot for ponies.
At the age of fifteen, Jakob was kidnapped and augmented, his violent past made him a perfect candidate for the project. When the experiment was found out, he was found guilty of being a crime against nature, and banished to the fringes of space, where he was sucked into a black hole, and landed in Equestria.
Cover art by my Bro in fics, Good0bye! Give my bro some praise!!!!
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I agree, its interesting but it could be a tad bit longer.
Perhaps extra detail? Longer dialouqe? Heck if I know I'm not a writer... (Well not a good one that is)
I will try for a positive comment when it has three pages
It would have been cooler he simply walked away
3950135
yeah. It would have. But he needs to vacate the area fast cause if they can teleport what else can do they do?
YES YES YES YES YES YES MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
... BEST STORY EVER, THE DEATH, THE GORE, THE SADNESS, THE PURE MADNESS IS DELICIOUS
CONGTRATSHULASHUNZ YOU WINS AN APOCALYPSE COOKIE
4107524
thanks man. Means a lot
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE
4110278 okay. Okay. Im typing the newest chapter now.
That's six people
4111094
4111122 oh, you know you didn't have to say that, you could've said it will be a secret revealed later in the story
4111138
dammit!
4111210 it's k, just delete your reply and you'll be fine
I swear if you have him be saved by twilight or princess Celestia (except luna) I will call "BULL SHIT"
PLEASE SOMEONE OTHER THEN THE MANE 5 I BEG YOU BE ORIGINAL USE THAT BIG BRAIN OF YOUR THAT THE UNIVERSE GAVE YOU AND THINK OF SOMETHING PLEASE
4111707 how about chuck Norris?
4111967 I...I....I I don't know how to respond to that.
Pony version of chuck or human?
4111979 either is good, he is our god, so he comes whichever form he wants
4112123 DELETE THE COMMENT I WILL GET RID OF MINE DO IT FAST FAST MAN FAST!!!!!!!!!! WE CAN'T LET THEM KNOW OF IT!!!!!
4112129 OH THANK GOD, IT WORKED
4112150 now then we never speak of this again. but in the future if you need any ideas on suspense or or very very very dark style of murder or cliffhangers I am your guy for that. well anyways have a nice day.
* turns around and walks away and pulls a button out of his coat*
I'll be back *he says while pulling down shades that magically appear on his face and presses the button. He then explodes in to a shower of rainbows and glitter*
4111979 so yeah, as I was saying, chuck is the god of gods, the legend among gods, all worship him
(There's even a picture of him arm wrestling with Jesus)
4112185 good point... hhhmmmmmmmmmm *rubs chin*
I think I will agree to that for now until new evidence arrives.
Three thoughts going through my head
1. Derp?
2. RANDOM ARMOUR AND WEAPONS YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
3. I see a lot of blood and death in his future
4124461
Well, the random armor and weapons....aren't so random. So...
YAAAAAAAYYYY!!!
4124634 STILL, STUFF TO KILL PEOPLE WITH, BEST. DAY. EVER. (I kinda wish I had that stuff, I would make stuff a lot easier [such as GETTING A FUCKING PS4 I HAVE BEEN ASKING FOR ABOUT 4 MONTHS])
4124870
dont censor it. Just say dat shit bro!
4124870 yeah... I have a lot of pent up anger, you should see me when I'm angry ( imagine adrenaline rush, but you get 20 times stronger and faster, and scare the crap out of everybody you see) lucky for you, your on my okay list and probably live nowhere near you, and I've only been in that state 3 times, and the people who have faced that wrath are mentally scarred for life, one guy runs away from me whenever I got near him
So don't make me angry, you won't like me when I'm angry
wait so the nanites escape his body and heal him, then create a bio armor around his body (body armor and helmet) then in which case also build weapons for him AAANND along with a having to fight a blue fur pussy cat?
I give you this one for creativity.. I GIVE YOU 8 OUT OF 10 MUSTACHES.
4124945
yeah! You got it!
woohoooooooooo!
rock on man!
4125921 THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!
... i would like to thank my awesomeness as well.
I want to thank my brain and fingers and... oh my gosh
4125938 you forgot chuck Norris for giving you those things
4126091 HA If chuck Norris is so great and powerful then he can come over to my house grab my head and proceed to bash it in to the keyboadsasjvnaskjavsnoaanjpoaaaaovnicuaskplcsakmsadsareiofrfvaaddfskjdfvnsdoflddcovkaofkvdkvmdofkvsdkfaskdvvspdjdpdvj
I was laughing like a maniac when I read that, now I REALLY want his abilities, oh and copy his to do list, a real keeper it is
Also reminds me of the four horsemen of the apocalypse from darksiders
Oh! And another apocalypse cookie for you
And another oh! Reminds me of batman that quote
4126427 btw PLAY DARKSIDERS!!!! BEST GAME EVER
You forget 11 and 12.
Step 11: Wake up with hangover.
Step 12: Buy more booze.
4126430
Darksiders 2 is better. I'm hoping for a 3.
4136536 oh, I mean the trilogy, all darksiders games are best
Well, that escalated quickly
bahahahahahahahah
I LOVE THE SONG
4153558
and the song loves you
as a set up chapter this is good
Ooooooo and he he and love the chapter
Oooooo lol and yay
by the look of this one is a action or slice of life chapter
