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Spike answers the phone and hits it off with a mare who dialed the wrong number.
Apparently, fate has a funny way of healing broken hearts.
Note: Inspiration drawn from the amazing show 6teen. If you want a good show that revolves around character interaction, you should watch it.
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5084087
I must report you.
(loljkgoodstory)
This is a really good premise! I like the sound of this.
This is gonna be featured so fast.
5084141 Lol, I doubt it. It's not really feature material.
Nice story.
5084144
*Coughs*
You were saying?
Nice stroy but it feels really familar. I think they did something similar in an episode of a show I use to watch called 6Teen.
5084281 Wow. Considering this thing came out with 3 dislikes right off the bat I'm legitimately surprised.
A snake named Monty. I see what you did there and I approve of it.
5084291 Dislikes still add heat to a story, which is part of the feature mechanic.
so a 6teen episode huh... well played
5084288 Yep, that's where I got inspiration from. I absolutely love that show and I'm glad someone else watched it.
As sad as this is, I really enjoyed it. It definitely deserves to be featured.
Oh my, someone else remembers that show?
In other words,
Spike being himself? Awesome.
Spike not being a trashtalker? Even more Awesome.
Twilight at the end? As awesome as Tom Selleck's moustache.
Oh my god. I remember that show!
and this episode exactly!
6teen was the greatest show I've seen. I wish they would bring it back to television.
5084479 I spent the last week binge watching every episode
I loved that show good work my friend
I'm listening
I understand that long-distance relationships don't work, but I can't really let the 'white lie' excuse appear. This story seemed a bit... cut short. Twilight lied to Spike about what actually happened. I'm not saying that's bad, it's just that... it felt wrong to me.
Then again, not all stories can have happy endings.
5084653 Yeah, it was under the "truth can be inconvenient" principal. Rest assured, I'm not necessarily approving of lying, but at this point in time, telling Spike what happened would've caused more damage than good. That's why I tried to write it as a struggle for Twilight to decide what to say. She didn't want to lie, but she figured he deserved to hear a better ending to the relationship than what the truth would have provided.
5084668
Understandable.
Then again, Spike could find out the truth in a sequel, and I have an idea of what the sequel could be like, if any.
Misty, one day a while later visits Spike... bringing along her coltfriend. Complications arise as Spike realizes that Twilight lied to her all those months ago.
This story could go very deep.
5084675 That could comprise an entire saga of stories.
Deep indeed.
5084681
You should start writing it. Right now.
QUICK! Write it down before you forget!
5084692 Don't worry. It's saved in the comments here.
5084720
Ah. That is good.
Say, what type of music do you like? Also, do you have a steam name? What is it?
5084087
sure, take all the fun out of it buddy
this is pretty good man. i forgot for a bit there that you actually were a good one-shot writer.
as for the show, i liked it a lot. it was stupid, at times, yet it played on that oh so well and made it enjoyable. i also remember this episode as well. well done and well played at showing your respects for it.
5084727 I like everything from this:
To this:
5084851
Ah. I got some songs you might enjoy.
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=yeKXm1u-sa8]
What if her snake is a andaconda....... Her andaconda don't !! Want some if don't got Wings son!!!!! :D
5084863 Good stuff right there. As for my steam name... I think it's like famouslastwords_69
5084291
Take those words and swallow them.
Well! Wasn't that a pleasant little twist-of-the-knife. Poor Spike... from Rarity shacking up with a stranger to a whirlwind long-distance romance that left him with nothing more than some amazing telephone bills. Wow. The cynical part of me thinks that this is what he can pretty much expect from his dating life if the show got a hold of it in the future. Anywho, an engaging little piece. Well done.
5084914
Heheheh. I see what you did there.
Your name is Dustin, correct?
Wow. I really hope there is a
series based on thissequel.*sobs* "why" he screamed to the sky, anguish written in every line on his body "why did it end like this"!
after hours of sobs he fell into a troubled sleep after running his throat ragged to the stars and moon.
this is how I felt after reading this. it was good but needs a sequel
5084992 Yep! Frank Dustin Reynolds is the full name
5085595
Well then, now we can talk about anything we want on STEAM!
ThePurpleMenace
5084945 Thank you, sir! I very much wish that I could of had a happy "romance" ending, but alas, long distance flings based on emotional confusion just don't seem to work these days.
5085600 I still haven't quite figured out Steam. It's very complicated.
Love it!
Hope I see more of Misty, Poptart, and Spike.
You, my friend, have earned yourself a follow!
Excellent story,
you've really outdone yourself this time around. I tip my hat to you my good sir
5085605
You'll get used to it, my friend.
Plus there are a LOT of free games!
Spike's life sucks. It's just a series of mares using him for things.
i love what you did with this story, it kinda gives me a better view on how i would like to think of Spike, because honestly, all i got from the episodes was that he seemed guilable, childish and a butt for everyone's jokes.
The Story in itself is beautiful, and it's ending leaves so much for the imagination, like does Spike and Twilight end up together?? or does Spike fly too go see Misty and finds out about what happened???
honestly, if you could ever follow this story up, or find someone who will, please do.
Is Monty... a python?
Wow, even in fanfiction poor Spike can't catch a break