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Thanks for Coming In! | Retired

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It's time once again for the Ponyville Game-Athon! It's a yearly event where teams of two participants compete in various fun events for a chance to win a prize!

Spike decides he wants to enter this year, and take home whatever the prize may be. However, after all his friends are already taken, he ends up on a team with somepony he doesn't even know.

Who the heck is Cloudchaser?

Theme Song: All Downhill From Here - New Found Glory

Editor: Avox
Prereaders: Gidget_TheGear and LightningBass94

Cover Art by Jayesixx

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 251 )

Ill read this later.

Woot woot!

Love it already!:heart:

4268766 thanks for checking it out :heart:

That was amazing! I can't really judge too much yet, because it just started, but so far the pacing is great and everypony's in character! Just a couple errors here and there, nothing too hard to fix. Definitely gets my like and favorite!
9.5 out of 10.

4268821 thanks! I try to write stories that are fun yet break away from generic plot lines. I appreciate the commendation

“I can’t. The blankets… they’re too comfortable.” Spike proceeded to burrow his way farther into his bed. “Come back tomorrow….”

I'm gonna use this now in irl

4268844 No problem! I'm glad that this is getting such great reception; it's great to see a writer suceed. Here's some advice: Be prepared for quite a few dislikes when you get into the romance parts. I know from personal experience... :ajbemused:

4268858 it's not gonna be till the end of the story. I wanna focus more on friendship and stuff in this one - almost like it's an episode of the show. but there will definitely be romance later - but trust me, i've written about Spike a lot, so i'm used to hate by this point :moustache::twistnerd:

Not bad at all. I'm interested to see where this is going.

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“Yes, And it also happens to be

You either need a period after "Yes," or a lowercase "And."

Rainbow eyed the Spikecuriously.

I have no idea what happened here. Really I don't.

4268900 oops... that will fixed momentarily!

I was so hoping Rainbow would get teamed with Trixie...The Battle of the Egos.:rainbowderp::trixieshiftright:
Anyway, Cloudchaser x Spike? That's a ship I never heard of. And who is Holly Dash? I will be keeping an eye on this.

4268984 Holly Dash is another background pony - a unicorn to be precise :twilightsmile:

Had to switch to a romance I felt comfortable reading. Once again, nicely done. I look forward to see how you develop cloud chaser since I have never read a story that stared her before.

Bro, did you import from gdocs? The formatting is all messed up. You gotta copy and paste from gdocs and use fimfiction's intent function.

4269167 I did. The formatting looks fine on my PC and tablet. Maybe its your phone by chance?

4269180 Nah, I'm on my laptop now. It starts getting funky during the second scene. I can screenshot it if you want.

This should be interesting, two complete stranger must work together for a contest. Also add the point that Cloudchaser already has a crush on Thunderlane while Spike probably still has one on Rarity. There is going to be drama everywhere and I can't wait to see it.

Oh! This should be fun.:moustache::pinkiehappy:

I sense awesomeness coming :pinkiehappy:

SFC

This is the second worst ship I've seen so far. Cloud chaser seems like a moody bitch and Spike is a loser that shouldn't be in the show.

TL;DR: bad ship, very dislike

4269526 now, not to degrade your opinion or anything, because not everybody has to like the same stuff, but why did you click on it if you already don't like Spike?

This is the first fic in a while that I really, really liked. The spelling/grammar is perfect (seriously, how did you do that?), and the story seems really good. Cloudchaser and Spike isn't something you see a lot, but it's looking really good right now. XD

4269683 thanks for the support man! I really appreciate it :pinkiehappy: As for the grammar, that's a combo of trial and error on my part and the suggestions from my editing staff. :heart: And i really love writing uncommon and unique stories and shipping pairs, so I'm glad you liked it

4269271 drama, fun and rainbow dash trying to get along with Trixie - all that and more is in store :twilightsmile:

4269856 holy crap! A wild unusual shipping has appeared!:yay::twistnerd: I'll update asap

4269983 no, I'm shipping them :heart: I was just making a Pokémon joke. Weird spike ships are my thing:raritywink:

I'll keep an eye on it. Have a thumb. :twilightsmile:
Nice inclusion of your favourite OP unicorn, too. I hope she's not as devastating in this fic as she is normally.

4270051 thanks for the support friend :heart:

"Rainbow Dash, and ... Trixie Lulamoon!":rainbowlaugh:

Alright, this has my interest. I'll be keeping an eye on this for updates.

4271286 sweet action :raritywink: i'll try not to dissapoint

I want more already, I don't usually read romance fics but this one caught my eye and drew me in. Keep it up and have a follow and a fav. :pinkiehappy:

It's very nice to see a crack ship fic that catches my attention; and this is one of them. I'm watching this one.

Huh, a borderline nonexistant Spike-ship. And it has a really interesting fun to read style to it?

Neato:coolphoto:

4271604 thank you kind person for checking it out :raritywink: i make sure to keep my stories unique and interesting, so I hope you won't be dissapointed :yay:

4272271 thanks for checking it out :pinkiehappy: my goal is to write at least one story for all the non-existant spike ships. Coming up on the line i've got Derpy, Lightening Dust and Octavia

4271690 thanks for checking it out :twistnerd:

Very unusual shipping pair, I'd like to see how this one plays out, you have my attention.

4272669 thank you sir! this is offically the second Spike x Cloudchaser fic, so we're breaking new ground here :twistnerd: :rainbowdetermined2:

Hey, good work man, I enjoyed the chapter a lot! Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more!

4272803 this is the first one

me and this author decided to see who could write a more popular Spike x Cloudchaser story, so he released one a couple days ago also

4273847 :heart: your confidence is appreciated

Love this story, and the chapter was awesome, but I was wondering: Is this more of a Cloudchaser x Spike story, or a Flitter x Spike story?

I'm liking the story so far!

4275055 this will be more Cloudchaser x Spike. it will become more centered on those two as the story progresses

“Rainbow Dash, and… Trixie Lulamoon!”

Hell. Yes.

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