Spike runs into a very depressed Sweetie Belle at Sugar Cube corner, and invites her to join Twilight, Trixie and himself for family game night to help her feel better. Of course, shenanigans ensue.
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Brilliant, mate. I can totally see those two seeing them.
This is cute, dude. Cuter than it has a right to be.
I'd modify the "weather report" beginning, though. It tends to turn people off.
Aw yeah, Spikey-Wikey gets a date!
Biggest "D'awwww moment I've had in a long while. Good work my friend.
3561067 Thank you.
And I will modify that.
Spikey Belle ship, nice.
MORE!!! SEQUEL!!! MORE!!!
Adorable, it's been too long since I read a good d'aaw story
3561475 Hmmm, sequel? Perhaps I will give thought to this!
3561588 Thank you, kind sir!
SpikeBelle is one of my favorite pairings. Good work.
welcome to hand out with me and the other just an error here other then that it was good i like spike and sweetie but twi and trixie not so much but more of spike and sweetie plz.
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I had to.
It's cool with the SpikeBelle happening, but seriously, what is with all the Twixie shipping happening? Do we love to see the idea of Twilight and Trixie as lovers for each other because they are basically rivals, or we just see Twilight as an in-the-closet lesbian and that apparently Trixie is the one pony that would be right for Twilight to come out of the closet with?
Other than that, it's a good attempt, but we've been here already: Spike loses crush for Rarity, Sweetie Belle confronts him, Spike invites Sweetie to hang with him and Twilight, we see that Twilight and Trixie are making out and eventually go to another room to be more intimate, Spike and Sweetie see that they have crush on each other while Twixie are in sound-proof and magic-proof area to have sex with each other offscreen. Rinse and repeat.
My only issue with this is that games night seemed to die a quick death. I mean they were meant to be doing it for family bonding, and what happens. They ignore the kids for 20 minutes while making out, then upon getting cought they simply retreat to another room to continue leaving the kids, once again, to look after themselves. Some family bonding that was. Also with the time used there it seems Sweetie only allowed herself about half an hour to hang there anyway, seems a bit short really.
3563264 Yea, I made this for a writing prompt thingy And it couldn't be over 3000 words. I was running on limited space
I apologize.
funny and adorable. great work
3563169 I just really like Twixie.
i just think they make a good team in a relationship.
But one thing I tried to do differently from the usual 'rarity breaks Spike's heart, so he finds sweetie as a second option', is that I wanted it to be that Spike stopped liking rarity on his own, that he grew up a bit.
3563064
That was my first thought as well
But seriously, how good is Turnabout Storm?
"Sweetie sweetly squeaked."
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Do I REALLY need to cut a bitch up in here?
lol Nah. I loved that. And the story as well. Clever, funny, and well characterized. Looking forward to more stuff from you!
here are my thoughts of this story:
*clap*
*clap*
*clap*
that is all
3563874 Lol! I was wondering if anyone would catch that little tounge-twister
thank you for reading!
Dat was adorable. I don't ship SpikexSweetie, but you made me a Twixie shipper.
Congrats on your featured
good story btw.
3564151 Wait... I'm featured?! I only use my phone to get on the site, and it doesn't show the featured box
3564187
Yup! I wish I can show you, but I don't know how to snapshot things
3564195 I'll bring my laptop to someplace with wifi here in a sec to check it. That's so awesome! Especially considering this story got 3 dislikes right off the bat.
I don't think this should be a one shoter it should be more to it!
3564324 perhaps I shall create a sequel
3564479 yay!
3564187
It's not quite the feature box, but you are in the popular stories box!
3563563 Oh I see, well that makes sense. I just thought it a bit rude of Trixie and Twi to be so self-absorbed like that. But yeah, space can be a real big constraint. Overall though I really liked this, Spike and Sweetie were so cute.
I know they were the focus of the story, so well done.
3566151 Congratulations! You have found the song that I got inspiration from!
3566173 yay!
I figured as much, the title made me think of that song
I ead the line "Since Trixie is a part of our family now" and I was extremely confused, so much so that it was to the point where I had to look at your previous stories... Now I feel like an idiot.... And I haven't even started reading.....
3566462 Oh, you know what, I should probably put something about trixie and twilight being a couple in there. Sorry about the confusion
I liked this story... It was a nice story...
How do you set a mannequin on fire by cutting a tomato?
3566549 Spike talked about it a few more lines in... I should have just kept reading and let my confusion sort itself out... It's just... It came right out of left field, and...
<- Should summarize it.
3566572 Lol, who knows? Probably the same way she burnt juice
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3566638 Good point...
That was nice! And just one more game that Trixie turns from family game to private game, good job you horny, horny mare.
I... LIKED IT!
Twixie with Spike actually being happy about the relationship is always good, and it's so nice to see a day in the life of a Twixie family (that is, with Spike being part of the family).
Not much for SpikeBelle, but I'm not against it either, and it was cute in this. I was mainly focussed on the Twixie though, especially them taking advantage of the hide-and-seek game to make out XD
Shenanigans, you say? And with a romance tag?
I hope Sweetie can handle it.
3569783 Lol, who knows?
3569703 Thanks!
Twixie is my all time favourite ship, and I wanted to at least include a bit about how her and Spike get along, Kuz that's a detail that doesn't get touched on much. (Btw, your Twixie Love Story fic is my all time favourite fanfic, so I had a fangirl moment when you favourited it, lol)
I hate it when I always burn mannequins when trying to cut tomatoes
good story!
3570310 Thank you
Great story! Though, it does leave a question on my mind.... A question that sounds like the title of a story I JUST read.... Hmmm. I wonder what that question could be.
3571507 I was really surprised by the positive reaction to this story.
I mean, I wrote it at 2 in the morning a couple days ago for a competition that was ending that day, lol. But, I'll be working on a follow up very soon, have no fear.
3571585
YEAH!.... We really need a snowflake emote on this sigh.