• Member Since 11th Dec, 2011
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TheLogoliner


I never thought that ponies would be so good. My brother showed it to me and soon enough, I became a brony. Now I've join this site in making stories for the first time. Join the Herd!!!!

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A teenage boy named Wyatt is transported to Equestria, a world with ponies, griffons, and dragons, but no humans. Now he must try to figure out how to live there, being the only human there.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 199 )

did you get permission to use that pic
if not ya dun fucked up

Not comfortable with the cover art.

Hey now, don't hate for cover art. He just needs to ask.

480678 I don't know if he did, but i can't read this because now I will think of Ceehoff's story, and judging by the votes I don't want to.

But why would you take that art? doesn't even fit unless you did a copy of Ceehoff's story.

480705 ya i cant bring my self to read it either damn cover art
decided to read first 2 lines
the hunger games
ya fuck this im out

Okay, at first glance, this is my (hypocritical) opinion:
*replace Minecraft videos with HiE*

480709 HG hater, Eff you too

480725 it is a book about gladiator style murder what do you find enjoyable about that

480733 BLOOOOOOOOOOOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOOOOOOOOOOOOD! I like bloodshed and combat. I got Nord blood in me, it's part of my nature.

480725 also learn to spell you pitiful excuse for a Cro-Magnon it is not hard and it wont make you look like such an obtuse moron

This isn't terrible, but it isn't good. I will see what becomes of this. Tracked.

480743 Make me, dirtbag I will do what I want.

Don't like it, don't read it

480678
He found it. He didn't know someone else was using it.
Fuck off.

480756 i did in fact read it it is good there are some things that i couldn't understand me im not saying i didn't like it im just saying it wasn't my favorite but i will track to see how it progresses

By they way, please explain about the cover art. I just found it at random and decided to use it

480776
Sorry for the fuck off comment, I might be bipolar.
OR I'M IMAGINING THINGS
-Digit

480776 Well Diabolic Dirtbag, why are you criticizing my spelling, when you can't capitalize right ?

480799 That is Diabolic GNOME and i get paid to be evil or did the name go over your head
480788 http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ceehoff is the artist and also wrote a story using his pic I would ask him if you can use his pic if I were you

480814 sorry, I didn't know. I'll change it
or maybe ask him

480819 i suggest change it is a notable story and some of the fans can be put off by the same pic

I looked back at the magazine that I was reading. Mostly looking at the news section of it.

I moved some of my dirty blonde hair out of my eyes so that I could continue to read. I just finished the first few chapters, even though this is the 4th time I've read this book, but every time I read it it never gets old.

i see what you did there and it doesn't make sense

480814 Okey Dokie Diabolic Dirtbag!

I'm gonna ignore the coveer art commets and say I like this story though, in my opinion, the chapters need to be longer, in my opinion, :twilightblush:

480839 just change back to original not going to let a book preference keep me from reading a story

This is good so far I give you 4 out of 5 moustaches and a derpy :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::derpytongue2: can't wait for more


Sincerely the Doctor

Damn people who judge on cover art. It's just cover art!

I like it. It was good, and doesn't mention bronies directly, so thanks.

Just make an announcement, I'm forced to change the cover art, so you'll see a different cover art for this story

sorry, I fixed it now, It was just a slight mistake I did. I shall start writing the real chapter now

Man nice twist with the start.

Scratch my previous comment I give it 5 out of 5 moustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:


Sincerely the Doctor

Few spelling and or grammar errors here and there, but nothing to freak about. Also, this is amazing. That is a fact. But lengthen the chapters.

Main character is a bit too resourceful and assumes the ponies are rational right off the bat even without remembering the show. Could be better.
:moustache::moustache: 2 handlebars for now.

I detect a discord in out midst...

Man, Rainbow Dash and Spike are being racist jerks. :ajbemused: And for what reason? Anyway, I hope they warm up too Wyatt.

I think somepony should point out that Rainbow and Spike are being mean to Wyatt for no reason.

489121don't worry, they're just being protective. It will change in the next chapter.

Also to make an announcement, I will make two Royal Wedding chapters soon. Actually in the next chapter:twilightblush:
Many people seem to be doing it, so I shall follow

485180
I can explain that.
He accidentally made two chapters, one of them he published on accident.
Conclusion: He dun' goofed.
Anyways, awesome chapter. I LOL'd when Applejack said "Please deist punch." That was hilarious.
Also, I have a new catchphrase!
SHE CLENCHED HER PUSSY!
Don't take it the wrong way, I'm talking about a fucking cat.
Cheers!
-Digit

490690
Heheh. Good luck with that.

I can't wait for more so I have one thing to say ALLONSY man


Sincerely the Doctor

Glad they like him now. Full speed ahead! This story is on an open road!

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