Much to my dismay this story is now cancelled, due to general uninterest in finishing it. I've just lost all will to continue this story, and I would like to apologize.
When Steven and Connie screw around during a warp, they find themselves in Equestria. Lion soon follows, but for some strange reason won't take them back Without the other Gems to help them, they have to find another way home, protect their new friends and stop several monsters/villains along the way. Perfectly normal for Steven, Lion, and Connie, but not as much for the ponies and monsters that they'll meet along the way.
Will not be excessively gory, but features blood, tagged with gore just in case.
Chapters (16)
Interesting...I'll track and upvote this for now.
There needs to be more SU/MLP Crossovers.
Anyway, maybe you try and focus on one story at a time, yeah? I noticed you seem to be having trouble getting out of the gate for what you've got so far. I'd like to see this go beyond one or two chapters.
Sweet chapter, hopefully the Jam Buds will be able to get out of this new development alright. Keep goin and stay golden^^
I need this. I love it.
You just took a horn to the head, are you sure you need to do the pain test still?
You know, Twilight's logic doesn't make a whole lot of sense for trying to create peaceful first contact. Even if she didn't drop them in the forest, she still would have kidnapped whoever she brought out of the blue. Heck, it could have been a king in the middle of a big speech. How'd that look to the people? Or what if her grabbing someone caused something bad, like someone on the way to the hospital and they ended up dying in Equestria.
Yeah, definitely would have made more sense to either go to the other world herself or merely open a window to make first contact; that would have been far less likely to be misconstrued.
I haven't started reading past the first paragraph, but I have a gripe about what you said in your Authors Note. The gems already use she/her pronouns, minus Steven. You don't need to use they/them for anyone except Stevonnie.
You're specifying that you're going to use she/her pronouns over ones that the gems don't use... I dunno, just seems a little pointless.
more plz...plz more
Twilight is so lucky it's these two, this could have been a WHOLE lot worse
Biz me mor or I'll be mean jk in love the story please continue
I like it so far
can I please have another
So far the characters are still believable an enjoyable just wishes a little bit longer
Really starting to like this. Already like the show, so this is up my alley. Keep it up, because your doing great!
6486056 like jasper or peridot
*reads the bad pun*
Go kill yourself....
I just had a thought. . . if the ponies were that initially freaked out by Steven's healing spit, I can only wonder what their reaction to Stevonnie might be.
Poor Spike. Though, if Spike were to say, it wasn't actually any gem that was alive, at least.
Though, it might be scary to mention his love of Rubies.
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Dude, I SO want to read that!!
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Yeah, Ruby's side of Garnet would TOTALLY split up and start burning the floor.
6510959 XD thankfully, they look different.
Stuffs about to et real
God don't freak me out like that, the beginning of this chapter made my eyebrows shoot up.
Other than that good chapter.
awesome chapter i love'd
it
Ohhhhh shit gonna go down
What da FUUUUUUCK?! I'm gonna be following!
I smell Peridot!
I sense Discord
No not Peridot all she is A adorably cute angry slice of pie
Still quite entertaining but it still feels a little shorts and it's over when it feels like it just getting started but that's my feelings on it but still quite entertaining and thank you for giving us this entertainment
Wow
Well that was fun.
You know, when reading this I was reminded of the Uncle Grandpa crossover episode.
This will be interesting.
I did not know one could be pushed like a crate of fruit. Amazing description.
ahhhhhhhh teaser no fairs no fairs
6499588 woah what got tangled in your mane...........
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*blows brains out*
Careful, you acknowledged steven universe in a way that isn't canon- The fans are going to try to have you killed now
The chapters may be short, but I like it that way.
Currently the only gripe I have with this story is that you keep flip flopping plot points. In the chapter proper its fairly evident that they are here for a purpose and that Lion can easily traverse both dimensions at will. But at the end of thechapter Twilight acts like that didn't just happen and asks for a counter spell even though it's not really needed.
my Monday afternoons consist of these activity's
Did pinkie have sex with them or something
I spoilered it for understandable reasons but it's not spoilers to anything.
6700768 First thing I need to point out that when I read that, I fell out of my chair laughing and banged my head on a table, secondly no. It was just a really great party.
6484906 About the horn to the head thing. I was tempted to put this into a later chapter.
Either Peridot or Discord... or both.
If this is story takes place after Chrisils is dethroned then it might be her.
It could also possibly be Tirek or Sombra.
And it was discord.
Ok I was completely wrong about who sent the gem clusters to Equis.
oh dissy
or peri
Daaaaang girl
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