The Doctor and Ditzy Doo take a short stopover in Ponyville before continuing their adventures, however, things get twisted when someone, or somepony, who is infamously known across time and space as a criminal jumps in their timeline. Shocked to find this surprise guest from his past, the Doctor helplessly is captured by this stranger, leaving Ditzy and her daughters to rescue him. However, it seems as though something darker is brewing, and the Doctor's companions may need help from more than their Doctor.
Chapters (26)
This story isn't really that bad. It's okay, has some minor grammatical errors, but nothing too bad.
One problem with your writing, however, is your usage of Time Lord and Time-Pony. For your story, you should always stick to one, as it is a proper noun. That being said, Time Lord is always spelled as two words, and Time-Pony should be capitalized.
Also, madman and madpony are two separate things, you should choose one and stick to it.
Other than that, this story is pretty decent. Sets something up, a little mystery, and a villain that I don't think has been used in the Doctor Whooves genre yet. Keep it up.
5053488 Yep, mad"man" and mad"pony" are separate, but there's a reason the villain is using mad"man", but the title is mad"pony" because, well, I don't want to spoil anything.
I'm going to put your stories on youtube....if that's ok
5059126 Well, I shouldn't mind too much about that, a little popularity could be good for me.
However, with the work being entitled to me, you would have to notify me when and if this story gets published somewhere else without it actually being me doing it. Also, be certain to give the full credit of writing it to me...not to sound conceited...but I was the one who wrote it! 
Sweet...cant wait to get started
Dont worry...I'm not one to take peoples stories and say its mine..I'm kind. Trust me ^_^
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Marvelous! Go ahead then!
Oh one more thing... If u want... U can be a guest... If u do have it... U can find me as docwhooves44 on Skype
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Oh no I don't do that sort of thing. Just FimFiction is all!
Sorry...I couldn't make a vid
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Not a problem! I'm perfectly fine with or without it, thank you, but the notion was encouraging.
MAGIC! *snort snort*
I love this series. Great workon the story line and the characters. However it did bug me a bit when a pony said everybody instead of everypony. Other than that it's great! Can't wait for the next chapter
OMG i love this so much!!!!
please continue this is FANTASTIC! (aha see what i did there....) 
LUV THE IMAGE!!!!!!
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Why thank you! I've been busy the past few days and stuck on refining the plot of the story to run more smoothly before I continue writing, and I like drawing in my free time so I added a bit of flair.
5190339 well its amazing none the less! I LOVE how you added the 5th doctor as a pony!!
im sooooo excited to see where this goes!
I wanna see if Ponyville knows about the 10th doctor and all that, and 5th be freaked out cause- well, a whole town knows about him and stuff....
sorry im rambling....
lol LUV the story!
YAAAAAAAAAY UPDATE!!!!!! WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
ok sorry i got a litte too excited.... xD lol
anyways yay! I love this story so far!
LOVE IT!
I was wondering if Doctor Whooves was gonna come up anytime...
lol
anyways, Wonderful so far!
:D :D :D
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What are you talking about? He's been here the whole time!
Oh, the tenth one.
He'll show up soon.
But you have to look for him. I'm not bringing him back directly like before. *hint* *hint*
5231560 no no no i mean like it seemed at first like only Ditzy knew about the Doctor.
I mean, like it wasnt clear whether or not Ponyville knew about the Doctor or not.... :)
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Well the Doctor hasn't run into anyone except Ditzy and Rarity (remove Sweetie Belle), and only Rarity has seen his cutie mark of the hourglass, Ditzy hasn't, and during her meeting with the Doctor, nopony knew that the Doctor's hourglass cutie mark could prove he was him, because nopony knew he had the hourglass. Even walking around Ponyville, random ponies couldn't say if he was the Doctor earlier because he looks completely different and his cutie mark was covered up.
This next chapter will also cover it much more. Also the last chapter, at the end, stated:
I'd tell you more but
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But yes, other than that, Ponyville knows who the Doctor is.
I LOVE IT!!!
On hiatus? NOOOOOOOOOOOO! The worst things on the internet are incomplete fan fictions. Really good incomplete fan fictions. Really good incomplete fan fictions that are on hiatus... Well, now I really only have 1 fanfic I'm reading... Sooo, time to go on a hunt again...
EDIT: woohoo!! Off hiatus! Awesome !
These shoes!
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They fit perfectly!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
finally.....
yesssssss.....
my life is complete.....
:D :D :D :D :D :D
But... It should be the doctor dances... It's like a thing, there's always a chapter called the doctor dances, and he has to dance... But seriouslt, great chapter.
Serves the master right. I hate people like him that unjustly think they're better than other people.
Ohhh... the celery... not the celery! No, doctor no!
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Is this part of a series?
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This is just a crossover I've made between MLP:FiM and Doctor Who, especially Classic Doctor Who with the Fifth Doctor. A lot of the earlier chapters start off from where Doctor Who episodes leave off, specifically TimeFlight.
Oh No! What happens next?!
The photo of pony doctor looks so cute :3