Cogneato Switch
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I skipped to the last chapter, and this is wonderful! Not very long but wonderful!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! I intentionally wrote it so the last chapter would more or less stand on its own, so it's great to hear that worked out.
I just have a minor nitpick, otherwise I really enjoyed this first chapter: it's Draconequus, not Dragonequus. Now that that's out of the way, time to read the next two chapters.
........ read it on a dare. holy celestia.
5016902 Thank you for catching that, I can't believe I missed it! Corrections have been made.
5017221 I hope you enjoyed it! If you did, I highly recommend Pinkie Pie's Key Party because I actually got pre-readers for it, unlike this one which was much more thrown together.
Sigh... I hats straight forward Discord.
Celestia Dammit, what a troll she is.
Nice.
OK, Cogneato Switch, I'm confused about something.
The story begins by painting it like Discord is asking Fluttershy for sex.
Then we get this bit:
Then the story finishes with them having sex, and discord saying it satisfied his needs.
So what was with this part:
Was there another kind of "physical need" he was referencing, that wasn't sex, but involves him being lonely?
5053682 This was truly a failure on my part; I was being lazy about explaining Fluttershy's mindset at that moment.
Discord was going after sex the entire time, but he tried to play it off like he wasn't, in an effort to embarrass Fluttershy and throw her off guard. Even though Fluttershy knew logically that Discord's hints were pointing to sex, she accepted that she misjudged him and began to question herself. If it were better written, it would have come off as a well-played mind-game from Discord, but I let it fizzle.
5060904 I got that and I think it's very good, I especially love when fluttershy said "I try to tell them" lol
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I'm glad you liked the Ophrys Bee!
Wow. Literally discussing the birds and the bees. Reason number 114 on why Fluttershy is Best Pony.
Down Discord, down!
This is Friends with Benefits? xD
Lol I read all of the chapters so it is amazing and a feeling for me to fall in love.
This is Fluttershy's revenge for Discord thinking about magically brainwashing her to agree to sex in the last chapter isn't it? He deserves this torture then.