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Twilight loves to learn. But if that was true then why was she not excited right now, she was on her way to learn a completely new kind of magic, a dream coming true for the young princess. And Discord was reformed now so no way he would do something to harm her and after the fight with Tirek where he learned his lesson… right?


Inspired by Discorded Lessons: Chaos Theory

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

I wish this had more chapters.

It is not spelled tee. It is spelled tea.

Tee refers to those little spikes that golfers set the golf balls on. Tea is the drink.

:pinkiecrazy:So many grammar errors...:pinkiecrazy:

4994540 If you see mistakes please point them out, I would like to improve.

Editing is a pretty cool guy. You should get to know him.

lol discord!!!!!!!

Enlightening... To a fly, a spider's web is chaos. To some, an eclipse is chaos.

Sequel Where they use their new powers please.

One of the hidden gems buried within Fimfiction.

Comment posted by aalelu deleted Jun 16th, 2018

Sequel Where they use their new powers please?

she flew off to the next intakt boulder

Whilst there are indeed grammatical errors I'm well are of the fact that not everyone has an editor on speed dial so I refuse to let it take away from my enjoyment of this story! And what an incredible story it is! I love the concept that to start to understand chaos you have to learn how dangerous it is, and then as your knowledge of it refines your better able to appreciate it's good qualities! It was neat seeing half of the Mane Six get pushed to their breaking point as they realized how scary their capabilities really are! Though I'll confess a bit of dissapointment in no like "now try to use chaos magic" scene or whatever. Maybe in a sequel?

The chaos was interesting and feels like something I could imagine happening in the show itself! And Discords backstory here is so fascinating! It feels like their is a lot deeper meaning to what Discord says and you can't help but wonder if his story is literal or metaphorical. And the concept that something just as insane is apparently the "good" to his ""evil"" is a really unique concept as well. Overall a beautifully tragic backstory that raises a lot of questions, same goes with his story of being in Equestria, it really punches you in the gut when you think about how afraid he was and seemingly still is to open up to others. That he laughed for literal weeks at the concept of anyone giving a damn about his personal well-being, you can't blame him for his reaction considering his backstory either...and of course it was very very very wholesome seeming the three students of chaos comfort and sweat to protect Discord! Such earnest emotion and care with no needless abrupt joke to undercut the moment is refreshing and feels quite impactful! :twilightsmile:

Ah, I was so enraptured by the last chapter I completely forgot there was a second one :rainbowlaugh:

Awesome! A nice little capstone, seeing Twilight and her nearly filling her role of being responsible for safeguarding chaos magic from her mentor. And it was hilarious seeing the princesses break down from frustration, irritation, confusion, and seemingly disbelief. Also an interesting little bit at the end that was a bit hard to read...but it almost sounds as if learning chaos magic gives you another form? Or was she merely thinking back to "that other guy"?

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