• Published 13th Sep 2014
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A lesson in chaos - Hydralisk



Twilight loves to learn. But if that was true then why was she not excited right now, she was on her way to learn a completely new kind of magic, a dream coming true for the young princess. And Discord was reformed now so no way he would do something

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Epilogue

About an hour later the trio was walking down the hallway.

“That was definitely, a different kind of lesson.” Twilight said.

“AAAAAAAAAA!” Pinkie screamed up “I FORGOT TO ASK ABOUT THE CHOCOLATE RAIN!”

Twilight and Fluttershy got a bit startled by Pinkies sudden pinkieness but Twilight gave her a soft laugh: “I will help you with that as long as you don’t flood ponyville and stay away from Applejacks farm.”

“You can do that?” Pinkie asked.

“Actually it is pretty easy now that I think about it.” Twilight said while going into thinking mode.

“Twilight?”

The ponies turned around at the sudden voice and behind them were standing Princess Celestia and Luna with questioning looks on their faces.

“While we do like a little surprise now and then I would really like to know why you and your friends are here today?” princess Celestia asked.

“What do you mean, I wrote you a letter that I was coming for my lesson with Discord, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy decided to tag along, you even answered my messages.” she answered confused.

As if on command the draconequus danced his way out of a curtain: “Oh I forgot to mention, I intercepted every letter you send to our dear sun-butt and faked the responses so she could not spy on the lessons.”

“Did you already learn everything relevant to chaos magic my dear student?” Celestia asked, ignoring the dancing group of Discords in cheerleader outfits.

“Yes princess Celestia, I did.” Twilight answered “So did Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy.”

“HAHA, that means you failed Discord!” Luna exclaimed “Because now she can teach us!” both of them smiling and Luna going to Twilight and throwing a wing around her.

Discord also smiling in return asked “Are you sure she can?”

“Of course, why should she not, If she can she will teach us.”

“No, I will not.”

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“What?”

“I am sorry, but I will not, no that is wrong I should not be sorry for denying you this, but I still have to.” Twilight said steadfast, making both princesses faces drop for one Celestia never expected her student to deny her something, and Luna did not expect her beautifull plan to fail so horribly.

“OOOOHHHH, THE LOOKS ON YOUR FACES, PRICELESS” Discord said while lying on his back, waving a white flag.

“Wa” Luna was completely thrown out of the moment and stuck with a open mouth, Celestia in return asked: “Can you tell us why Twilight?” her left eye a bit twitching.

Twilight in return put a hoof to her chin, thinking a moment before answering: ”Do you know the moment when parents deny a foal candy because they are not good for the health? Well, I am the parent, you are the foals and chaos magic is the candy.”

After a short moment she just replied with a short “Ah”... before starting a mad dash towards the draconequus.

DISCORD, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH MY STUDENT!!!” she said with a raging royal canterlot voice, Discord himself, flying to safety.

Twilight gave a soft laugh over the antics that they lived in, now able to cherish it even more after understanding how lucky she truly was.

The image in the mirror that she saw for a short time returned, making her shiver one last time before returning to her mind and disappear for a long time.

Comments ( 10 )

I wish this had more chapters.

:pinkiecrazy:So many grammar errors...:pinkiecrazy:

4994540 If you see mistakes please point them out, I would like to improve.

lol discord!!!!!!!

Enlightening... To a fly, a spider's web is chaos. To some, an eclipse is chaos.

Sequel Where they use their new powers please.

One of the hidden gems buried within Fimfiction.

Comment posted by aalelu deleted Jun 16th, 2018

Sequel Where they use their new powers please?

Ah, I was so enraptured by the last chapter I completely forgot there was a second one :rainbowlaugh:

Awesome! A nice little capstone, seeing Twilight and her nearly filling her role of being responsible for safeguarding chaos magic from her mentor. And it was hilarious seeing the princesses break down from frustration, irritation, confusion, and seemingly disbelief. Also an interesting little bit at the end that was a bit hard to read...but it almost sounds as if learning chaos magic gives you another form? Or was she merely thinking back to "that other guy"?

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