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Absolute power corrupts, that is a fact.
But sometimes there is that one person who is able to prevent you from following the call of madness, who manages to be a shining sun in the madness we find ourselves in.
Sunset never thought that she would be that sun for Twilight, nor did she expect for Twilight to keep the power that corrupted her in the first place.
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That is an interesting alternate take on Sunset helping Sci-Twi - Sunset's memories actually showing what such power can do.
But I have to ask - is the story really complete? Because it reads like it would be continued...
6888674 This is simply a idea I wanted to get out and if people are interested then it will be continued but this story is simply how it started similar to this
Sequel? THIS IS A PROLOGUE.
More chapters would be appropriate.
I agree with Masterweaver, this is more of a prologue of things to come the way you ended the chapter. Definitely looking forward to seeing this continued.
You had me at that title.
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I would definitely love to see this continued.
This is very interesting, I would love to see this continued.
I like it....But i'm confused still but what i just read.
This is not complete and should be listed as an alternate universe.
Is this gonna be a SunLight? If it is, gonna follow and fav xD
the Idea is interesting i give you that there are several ways you could go with this concept lets see where it gets
The only thing is please don't bring Romance in this it is done far too much and romance is something someone should only do if you have can romance (what cant be said about many Writer) because then it gets only cheesy and cringe inducing. Or plain Bad
I... feel a little lied to. This is only a first act. Please continue this.
More please?
Twilight is badass in this story, right?
I'm interested in seeing more as long as you don't start shipping. That would just add unnecessary complications to the plot, making it far more difficult make this believable. I'm only saying this because I've seen too many stories with similar tones that were completely ruined because the authors couldn't resist forcing a romantic subplot in regardless of how little sense it makes for there to be one.
6891692 well yea they should have a deep relationship, but nothing romantic.
6896739 Fav it, i will blog the sequel and put it into a chapter.
Interesting idea, nice work.
Your smaller description of your story has a small error.
6899683 Thank you. Fixed#
6900788 No problem!
I for one would definitely like to see this continued.
Edit:
Also, I found this story at the top of the feature box, even with mature enabled.No wait, it was in Popular Stories. Still, that's doing pretty good.I like the smell of this. Now I need to taste more of it.
Well, I approve of this.
Please continue.
This has potential please continue
I can't wait for the next chapter
Gentlemen.
We need more.
Nice first chapter. I can't wait for the rest. (Structurally, this can't be anything but the beginning of a longer story. The text established "Twlight needs to get things back to normal" as a driving conflict and it'll be very difficult to make it satisfying if "back to normal" is anything other than "Twlight learns to make peace with her new powers".)
I've always loved these "coming to terms with power" stories. They're a great opportunity to explore characters and, at the same time, they tend to do it in a way where any hardship is satisfying to read about because you know the character is earning a reward. (As opposed to the polar opposite, being kicked while they're down.)
6890315 Interested? I'm hooked! This is one of the rare gems of the Fimfic community!
I like this AU. I like it alot.
This is definitely interesting. Definitely want to see more.
This is an interesting story. But still, AWESOME!!!
Both a fascinating premise and an amazing start. You really captured the "power high" for lack of a better term, Twilight was on, and how Sunset stopped her before, well, everything happened was truly interesting and cool to behold. I'll admit, I never even considered what the memory of being hit by the Rainbow Laser of doom might do to a person, and this was beautifully executed here with both the description and the way it was presented was just awesome to behold.
I definitely want to see where this goes, and you have definitely earned another follower with this fic.
Yep. Want more.
More is wanted in the cup of trillions....................TRILLIONS!!
This is too good to just leave it be.
This most definitely has great potential, if executed correctly. The idea of what would happen if Sci-Twi still had the power she did is one that definitely makes one's imagination run wild.
The challenge, however, will be: What will the conflict be, how will Twilight's character react to this, and how will the rest of the school react to this?
Really interested in seeing something come out of this.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please?
Human Twilight with OP Magic powers
I Likey
Good Story, but there are two nitpicks: First: Does Twilight have to stay Midnight Sparkle forever now or can she change back whenever? Second: I think Cadence should've FALCON PUNCHED Cinch in the face instead Sunset Shimmer for reasons that're CLASSIFIED.
Just something I'd like to point out because I'm a picky reader. Keep up the good work and can't wait to hear from you soon. Later Dude!
Can you please update more on this story it is getting very interesting to read I hope you write more soon
Will we ever see a sequel to this? This might actually have promise if a decent plot is set up for her.
Can you please continue this story.
I liked this. Thanks for writing it.
this .... this THIS , THIS IS AWESOME . Dude I have so many questions I want answered , like is this going to be shippish because I vote yay, and like can we get more mental functions of twilight , also the stylization of sthis is on point , like the "pain" oh my dog I felt that , just by reading it. Please more, like in the midnight hour I cried MORE MORE MOARRRRRR!!!
Lol thanks for an awesome story
Oh my GOD!!!!! I definitely agree with reboot this is AWESOME MORE please!?!? if this is shipping then yay.
Why is there not more of this?
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Becouse it's a idea I once head that I simply wanted to share. There is nothing more that I can think of other then that one sugesion a friend of mine made to slowly turn this into Warhammer 40k and make Twi the God Empress and make Sunny into Horus.
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That's fair. This just seems like a "Part One" kind of story in my opinion, but I can respect if you have no desire to continue it.