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1300 years. That is how long Princess Celestia has ruled her kingdom without a break. But it was not meant to stay that way because Luna and Twilight managed to find the millennia old record and revealed a horrible secret. Princess Celestia has nearly 100 years of unused vacation, and as a good student and sister they have no other choice than to force Celestia to take that time of. It wouldn’t have been so bad if a magic portal didn’t appear right when her holidays were about to start to whisk her away into a unknown world.


mlp/zero no tsukaima crossover


Big shout out to my great editor Poliamida for being awesome.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 169 )

There's one here where Luna is summoned instead of Celestia. Hopefully you will make it longer than that one.

Huh... This looks like it could be amusing. Poor Louise, she's got absolutely no idea exactly who and what she has summoned.

I like it especially since I have seen the anime as well please continue.

When will we see the next chapter be up?
You have my interest.

Finally a promising crossover with that series. I've been waiting years at this point for a good one. Now dont let us down!

Is this actually kind of likeable Novel Louise, or total bitch Anime Louise?

I'm going to have to say, I'm very thankful you're making this crossover. The only other two pony crosses with Zero was one with Luna, which didn't get past the first night and another one about a Fallout: Equestria oc. Neither have updated in years, so I hope you do well here.

However, I would probably clean up this chapter, dialogue wise. You have the characters down, but there are points where it feels...stilted? I'm not sure if that's the word to describe. Eh, Nothing a couple of glances over can't fix. Keep up the good job.

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points where it feels...stilted?

I'm not sure I understand what you mean.
Can you give me a example?

6380650 Okay, looking back through, stilted is the wrong word. It's not stilted. I just think you should slow down a bit. Otherwise it's very good.

Aha, so Lulu wanted Tia gone so she could have some exclusive "Twilight Time" eh?

6411244 Chill, I am currently fully into a chapter of another FoZ crossover over at fanfiction. Next chapter is nearly ready, only editing left.

6411616 short for Familiar of Zero which is the english name of Zero no tsukaima

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Chill, I am currently fully into a chapter of another FoZ crossover over at fanfiction. Next chapter is nearly ready, only editing left

I did.

Okay, how in the hell did she not notice the wings folded up? I mean they're that obvious.

Wow, we have a little Captain Oblivious here hn? I mean, to be fair, those wings have the same color as Celly´s coat, so they kinda blend in... not.

Also, a good thing Celestia tested her magic in a safe location. Trying that in the school, well, that would have resoultet in a short story methinks.^^

Uh... Peers* not Pers on one of those sentences with the scene at the school

Alrighty! Finally a Familiar of Zero crossover here.. This should be fun. At least Celestiais calm about all of this... though considering the anime, that won't last long I bet... the idea though is good.. Celestia's had waaaaaaaaay too much overtime built up.. granted she's a princess but still that job can take the toll

6526834 I did the math 1300 years work with 4 weeks per year is 100 years on holidays.

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I also get the feeling that the ulterior reason behind Twi and Luna getting Celestia ON that vacation in the first place was so Luna could get some alooooone time with Twi's flank.....
Ohhhhh my

I think that poor Louise is going to freak out big time when she finds out that Celestia is a princess

6527366 KO hope the next chapter is coming soon, this story is getting good and hopefully even better. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2:

6799392 Well I am currently waiting for my editor to finish the next chapter so there is that. Also I HAVE TIME TO WRITE!!!:pinkiehappy:

Ok, Celestia just teleported Guiche to headmasters tower. Teleported somebody in the world where of six magics (4 elements, Void and Elven) only one magic - Void is capable to do teleportation. Teleported somebody to the possibly most knowlwgefull mage in Academia. This will be golden!

I'd rather Louise get transported to Equestrian instead.

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It takes away a lot of the appeal, I think. The Familiar of Zero is at least half about the backwards political and class system in the world as a result of mages making themselves rulers and those without magic the commoners. As herself, Louise isn't that good enough to stand alone.

Plus, with Celestia, I'm sure they probably could go to Equestria at any time. The major reason she is allowing herself to be away, because she is on vacation, offers a lot of possibilities.

6821005 Besides, this is the first time she's ever had a human student. Every one of her previous students were ponies so this would be a much welcomed change of pace for her.

Interesting story im curious on how will improve Louise's emotional attachment without Saito.. OH! here's an idea why not have Louise Summon both of them for example as Celestia goes to her supposed vacation Louise at the same time summons Saito and as he enters the portal that would make him her familiar Louise void magic intertwines with Celestia's magic hereby yangking her and being summoned with Saito so both of them will be her familiar XD ... that would be interesting...

Well, you've managed to capture Celestia's motherly tone and teacher persona quite well. So far I'm loving the direction that this is going, taking it in a bit of a unique path in regards to other crosses with this anime. Kudos for that.

“You are a devil in white.”

So Celestia is related to Nanoha Takamachi?

Uuuhhh, the dark side upgraded from cookies to cake. Now nobody will be able to resist anymore!

6848280 Considering the emphasis on friendship in both Celly's and Nanoha's series I'm going on a limb and saying yes...

Now that was fun. The way you wrote Celestia's teaching methods and her interactions with Louise were so cute and heartwarming. Celestia is best teacher. :heart::trollestia:

6848492 Imagine Louise pulling off a Starlight Breaker.

interesting story though maybe you need a pre-reader or editor saw a few places where you changed tenses

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My bad, I'm the editor, but when the editor is not a native speaker things tend to go fuzzy.

You know, I should have expected to find one of these eventually. Familiar of Zero crossovers show up in every bloody fandom, and MLP FIM is not exception.

Still, this was better executed than most, and has definitely caught my attention

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