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After the failed attempt of Chrysalis and her changelings on Canterlot, Equestria has experienced a time of peace. However, that all changes when changelings begin to attack cities, towns, and villages around Equestria and with the looming doom of a full scale war. Celestia and Luna are unaware of a looming darkness creeping back into the light.
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Sorry I took so long, but your review is done. You can see it Here. I am intrigued at how this will end so I plan to stick around until then.
5362260 thank you for taking the time to review my story.
5362435 No problem.
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5768147 Thanks for the catch, I must have missed it when I reread it before posting it. I truly appreciate it.
Due to several problems I have with this story, I'm rejecting it from Goodfic Bin submissions.
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6325639 Thank you for taking the time to review the story. All the notes you have touched upon I'll use to make the story less cliche and make it flow better with less chunky paragraphs and a more in depth look into the changelings and the characters. I truly due appreciate your time in looking over the story.