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Thunderclap421


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This story picks up right where my last fan-fiction left off, for less confusion, and no, my last fan-fiction it is not pony related until right before the end. (in last fan-fiction)--> Sergeant "Thunderclap" is told by his commanding officer to save himself and jump through a prototype teleporting device the UNSC was creating to transport troops and ships faster than the Covenant forces. The base was unexpectedly attacked by an extremely hostile, unknown, and deadly alien species that apparently wanted the device but as soon as the Sergeant jumped through, his squad sacrificed themselves for him to get word to the UNSC about the unknown aliens. But that was just the beginning of a whole new, pony-filled life for the unsuspecting soldier...



Please, if you can, comment and like or dis-like. If your not a fan of these kinds of stories, then please, don't read and then dis-like. I do not appreciate rude people. Yes, there is sex in this story, but it is blocked out. If I get enough requests or likes, I will make a clopfic for the scenes.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 11 )

erm.... kind of TOO easygoing.... seeing that... you know... they never really had conflicts before.... i mean, seriously, but due to my extreme wanting of reading this stuff ill track

Spiffy, do not worry, my fine feathered friend, there will be much more than this get-to-know-lovey-dovey-crap. :rainbowlaugh:

Well, I think you're doing a good job so far Thunderclap :)
Just a few typos every now and then, but besides that, I'm liking it :)
never read something like this before :raritywink:

Well, if anypony dose NOT like halo fan-fictions, then do not read my LAST fan-fiction. This fan-fiction has no connection to Halo other than the Sergeant THAT'S IT. Do I need to dumb it down any more than that??? :facehoof:

Oh well, it dose get better, but everypony just has to give it time to get to the good stuff. I think it is called 'patience' :ajbemused:

Pretty good so far bro. But maybe you should make the chapters a bit longer, and make sure to spellcheck them with something like Microsoft Word before you publish. Other than that, keep on on trucking! :pinkiehappy:

Yes.... Yes you do.
"Are you saying you want to sleep with me?"
Best line ever.

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