Discord decides to take revenge by taking over Equestria and sends Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to Gravity Falls where they become human girls. They meet Dipper and Mable Pines and ask for help to get back to save their home.
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Eclipse208
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It's so adorable
insta fav
Typical Dipper, yes the book will have every answer possible.
Woah:O
Awesome story. Here's hoping for a sequel. ^^
Thanks. It meens so much!
Nice fanfic so far! Could use a little bit better grammar but other than that it's great!
It was fun!
But...
Luna was too OOC for me (by the time Discord got a second chance she had regained a great degree of assertiveness)
the color for the twins (every human turn pony should have the color that goes best on them for cloathing as the color of their coat. just a question of "hey I'm in a multicolor pony verse so why must I have a pink-ish beige coat when it could go marine blue, bright red or sun yellow?"
in "The Inconveniencing" it's shown Mabel has lime green eyes (we'll assume Dipper does too)
in MLP:fim the comic No 5 there is a pony who Twilight thanks who she call Maybell she has a star cutie mark, a pink sweater a purple coat (the same shade as the skirt mabel was wearing with that sweater) brown mane and braces
following that patern Dipper has a coat the same color as his pants: blue-ish grey or the same color as his T-shirt: red-ish orange
or even better like that
^^^^^^^
This is too rushed, but nice concept
it needs a sequel asap
hmmmmm an interesting story so far its ok but are celestia and luna hundred of years old why would luna be dating dipper it makes no sense
You forgot about the picture disclaimer
Defiantly to rushed.Good so far though
But otherwise in I liked it!
This is so trippy, since I´m a speed-reader so this is about how fast normal stories go for me, which means this is SUPER fast. Like, it took less then five minutes for me to read the whole thing, and thats including stuff like clicking to go to the next chapter, commenting, scrolling down, etc ect.
Maybe I read it a tad too fast
OUR.
Also still far too rushed.
Also, FIRST!
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Good point. Also still far too rushed.
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woah is correct.
Still far too rushed.
See the idea is amazing, but the way you written the story was just too rushed. It ruins everything. You need an editor or at least some assistance of an experienced writer on FimFic.
Good plot.
But the story sucked as hell cause you rushed it!
Sweet Celestia you need help ASAP! What kind of person doesn't know how to spell unsure?
I still think you could use help. Better yet, an editor.
Besides that, it was okay I guess.
Now if you excuse me, I GO!
Okay, okay. I'm gonna get quite a few down votes for this, so feel free to ignore.
But why. Why did you have to go down the seventh/eighth element fanfiction rabbit hole?
It's rushed and dipper and luna need to share more chemistry before they got together. It seem like that dipper likes na for her looks and idk why luna likes dipper. I just needs more thought and to be less rushed
could be slower, great fic though.
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yep..to both of those points
story was going WAY faster than that one that had sunset as part pheni..pin..dangit..part fire bird and got reincarnated cause of that into a world where humans are just plain paranoid and still in medieval times with elves and demons and all that...and that is always the fastest paced story i have ever read...until now...
cause this story did NOT even take a full hour for me to fully read