Trapped in Gravity Falls

by Eclipse208

Chapter 6 Final

Luna's POV.

I didn't want to leave, but I had to. Going through the portal was a weird sensation. I could feel my self turning back into a pony, yet all I could see were many colours swirling around. It made me feel quite sick. I landed with a thud and saw Celestia by me. Her crown was on her head and her cutie mark had returned. I looked at my flank, and saw my cutie mark there. I looked around and noticed that we were in the Canterlot artefacts room. I turned to see what the portal was, and realized it was a painting of a shooting star above a pine tree.And then I realized, where was Discord?
"Luna, we need to find Twilight and the others" Tia said, as she got used to being a pony again.
"Yes of course. Tia, the painting is a portal" I said holding my hoof towards the picture.
"We can't worry about that now. We must go" she said whilst walking towards the door. I got up and as I was walking to the door, I saw a flash out of the corner of my eye.
"Tia. Look" I said, cautiously turning around. My sister looked at me and her jaw dropped. I wondered what she was looking at, and I saw them.
"What are you two doing here!" I shouted.

Dipper's POV.

I know I shouldn't have followed her through, but what if she had forgotten about me. I couldn't just let her go. The portal felt weird. All I saw were colours and a weird sensation going through my body. I fell on my face and looked up to see a blue pony standing in front of me.
"What are you two doing here!" it shouted.
"Luna?" I asked un-shore. A older looking pony stood behind her. She had a white coat and the same hair that Celestia had, so I knew it was her. I tried to stand up but I just fell down. I looked at my self and realized that I was a pony! My coat was a pale yellow and my mane and tail was brown but I still had my hat. I looked at my flank and realized the was a blue pine tree on it. I looked to my right and saw a pony that looked a lot like me, except she had longer hair, a pink jumper on and on her flank was a shooting star. She looked at me and smiled, showing braces. It was obviously Mabel.
"OMG! Were ponies!" she said jumping up and down.
"Why did you come? Our world isn't safe" Celestia said, looking very serious.
"I was worried about you and wanted to help. So I grabbed Mabel and we followed you here" I said, frowning. I thought that they would want us to be here.
"As you are here, you can help us. But be careful. Discord is the lord of chaos, and will stop at nothing to cause it" Luna said, becoming serious. We both nodded and ran after the princesses through their magnificent palace. We reached the throne room to see it in bits. The walls had cracks in them and a weird creature sat on a red floating throne.
"Hello there princesses" he said, smirking.
"Leave Discord, and return Equestria to it's normal self" Celestia said, stamping her hoof on the ground. Discord started to laugh.
"You can't tell me what to do. I'm the lord of chaos" he said, looking more menacing.
"Then we will just have to stop you" a new voice said. I turned to see six ponies and a dragon standing there.

Celestia's POV.

"Twilight Sparkle" I said, in happiness. They were all wearing there elements and they ran towards us.
"Princess your alright" she said, panicky.
"I'm fine. what about the elements?" I said, quickly. She frowned slightly.
"The book said, to turn the Lord of Chaos to stone for a third time, two more elements, Love and Peace, will be revealed when a Princess remembers their actions" she said remembering of the top of her head. Luna and I both looked at Dipper and Mabel. I remembered the time when Dipper filled Luna with love and when Mable made peace with us instantly. A bright light glowed around their necks and two necklaces appeared. The other six were activated. The eight ponies flew into their positions, and a rainbow flew at Discord. His laughs turned to shouts, as he turned to stone. The ponies flew down and rejoiced happily.
"Celestia, who are these ponies?" Applejack asked.
"This is Dipper and Mabel" I said.

Mabel's POV.

I was one of the elements of harmony and I had just defeated the Lord of Chaos! My necklaces was gold and had a pink, shooting star gem in it. Dippers gem was a blue pine tree. I had met Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbowdash, Applejack, Spike the dragon and, my personal favourite, Pinkie Pie. They were all so nice. I saw Luna and Dipper talking, so I went to go talk to them.
"Hey Mabel. We were just talking about what's going to happen now" Luna said smiling.
"So are you to going to stay together or what?" I asked, curiously.
"Well, Twilight said that the portal closes and opens on a full moon. And the portal has just closed" Dipper said, looking at me.
"We can't get back now!" I said. Wasn't he worried.
"Time in your world is at a standstill. You can stay here as long as you like" Luna said, now almost screaming.
"That is amazing" I said jumping up and down.
"So I guess this is the end of a adventure. And now we begin a new one" Celestia said wisely.
And that is how I met the Princesses that got Trapped in Gravity Falls.

The End

Author's Note:

I hope you enjoyed the story.

Comments

[Izintar the Odd]

It's so adorable insta fav

[GIGA-XISBASS]

Awesome story. Here's hoping for a sequel. ^^

[Eclipse208]

Thanks. It meens so much!

[Philo Hippos]

It was fun!

But...

Luna was too OOC for me (by the time Discord got a second chance she had regained a great degree of assertiveness)

the color for the twins (every human turn pony should have the color that goes best on them for cloathing as the color of their coat. just a question of "hey I'm in a multicolor pony verse so why must I have a pink-ish beige coat when it could go marine blue, bright red or sun yellow?"

in "The Inconveniencing" it's shown Mabel has lime green eyes (we'll assume Dipper does too)

in MLP:fim the comic No 5 there is a pony who Twilight thanks who she call Maybell she has a star cutie mark, a pink sweater a purple coat (the same shade as the skirt mabel was wearing with that sweater) brown mane and braces

following that patern Dipper has a coat the same color as his pants: blue-ish grey or the same color as his T-shirt: red-ish orange

or even better like that­
^^^^^^^

[mikki]

it needs a sequel asap

[olivetho]

You forgot about the picture disclaimer

[Maddyroxie]

dipper is suppose to date my oc

[Maddyroxie]

But otherwise in I liked it!

[CatStar The Fourth]

This is so trippy, since I´m a speed-reader so this is about how fast normal stories go for me, which means this is SUPER fast. Like, it took less then five minutes for me to read the whole thing, and thats including stuff like clicking to go to the next chapter, commenting, scrolling down, etc ect.
Maybe I read it a tad too fast

[Nox Knock Jokes]

Good plot.

But the story sucked as hell cause you rushed it!

"Luna?" I asked un-shore.

Sweet Celestia you need help ASAP! What kind of person doesn't know how to spell unsure?

I still think you could use help. Better yet, an editor.

Besides that, it was okay I guess.

Now if you excuse me, I GO!

[shadowstar618]

Okay, okay. I'm gonna get quite a few down votes for this, so feel free to ignore.

But why. Why did you have to go down the seventh/eighth element fanfiction rabbit hole?

[herobrins mom]

8560797
yep..to both of those points

story was going WAY faster than that one that had sunset as part pheni..pin..dangit..part fire bird and got reincarnated cause of that into a world where humans are just plain paranoid and still in medieval times with elves and demons and all that...and that is always the fastest paced story i have ever read...until now...

cause this story did NOT even take a full hour for me to fully read