• Member Since 16th Apr, 2012
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Uzlesniz Savage


Formally Watt Savage, if you new me as that, its still me, just changed a bit....im a earth pony now XD, thou im still the same colt, drop by and say hi, Later yo -Uzlesniz

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When discord is freed and celestia is gone, its up to the elements to get her back. But no pony knows who stole her....

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 12 )

all i have to say is...
the story is good
not in the grammar and spelling department though
it is a pree good idea
however, the grammar is bad, and the punctuation is pree bad as well
i would run it through a proofreader first before posting if i were you
one that is good in the English department
like really good

Hey the next chapters will be longer than the others so enjoy:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh:

Hey, If youread this it would be much appreciated if you coment and/or like/dislike the story so I can help fix my other stories:scootangel:
Thanx and keep readin':eeyup:

Put some DisLestia up in this story bro. Discord x Celestia fan here. But yea pretty good but try making the stories a bit longer or combining two chapters into one. Just my opinion.

1055865. Thanx. For commenting by the way, and i couldnt put dilestia in there. It didnt fit tthe story line well, but anyhoof. I thought about doing that, but i didnt no where to combine the chapters and. I thoughtt about adding more, but never got around to it...:pinkiecrazy: rhanx for the advice..:pinkiehappy:

1058981 ha, by the way, cool profile photo:pinkiecrazy:

Thanks yours is awesome as well. :pinkiehappy:

Thanks yours is awesome as well. :pinkiehappy:

1073499 thanx, maybe you could join ma group:pinkiecrazy: if you want:twilightsmile:

NOOOO FLUTTERSHY!!!:fluttershbad:

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