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MLPEGRRR


I love MLP and drawing and writing. My fave out of the mane 7: Sunset Shimmer. Mane 6: Rainbow Dash. My brother is: BronySoldier98

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ELSA LOSES CONTROL OF HER POWER AND MAKES A PORTAL TO PONYVILLE!

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Comments ( 54 )

>Frozen Fic

Aw, sweet! Dem chubby Elsa thighs. Dat plump Elsa ass.

>they're horses

Ffffffffffffffffff- :unsuresweetie:

edit: I still thumbed up your fic tho.

All MLPEGRRR FICS require the EXCESSIVE use of CAPITAL LETTERS.
In the EVENT that CAPITAL LETTERS are NOT being USED EXCESSIVELY, ALL WORK MUST be EDITED and RESUBMITTED with EXCESSIVE CAPITAL LETTERS.

Downvoting a fic with Mai Waifu Elsa in it?

That's a paddlin'.

:eeyup:

4916877 I HAD TO RE TYPE IT WHEN I DID IT IN ALL CAPS.:derpytongue2:

I know this was written by a nine year old because no one above that age would write such a wish fulfillment frozen and my little pony crossover.

4923775 ACCTUALLY, I'M TEN! :duck::twilightangry2:

WHERE MUH NEXT CHAPTER?

WHERE?

AT LEAST SAY YOU ARE MAKING IT AND PUT AN END TO MY AGONY :unsuresweetie:

You can't title it Equestria Battle and then not show us the titular event! I'm gonna have a fit if you do. I wanna see an Equestria Battle! :raritycry:

4937464 I'm getting to it! Promise!:twilightsmile:

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:raritystarry:

Yes! YEEES! *stops crying*

4939143 SORRY IT'S TAKING SO LONG. I'VE BEEN BUSY.:twilightsheepish:

4939606

OKAY. I LOVE ELSA A LOT EVEN THOUGH I NEVER REALLY WATCHED FROZEN SO I AM EXCITED TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS, ALSO AN EQUESTRIA BATTLE SOUNDS BADASS.

Love this story i wish for more:rainbowkiss:

4962466 THANKS!:twilightblush: THERE WILL BE! :scootangel:

Please continue soon. If you need any help I'm there to help. :twilightsmile:

CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL

4924275
You must be at least thirteen to sign up for fimfiction.

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this is the what i hear when reading this fic

I CANCELED THIS STORY BECAUSE OF THE HATERS AND SOMEHOW MY STORY GOT PUT IN GROUPS THAT I DIDN'T PUT IT IN!

5101443
:raritydespair:

NOOOOOOO! Such a chillhanger?! How could you? That's the work of a monster, to cancel on the tail end of a cliffhanger

5101449 I MIGHT CONTINUE IT, BUT FOR NOW IT'S CANCELED.:trixieshiftright:

5101331

YEAHS! That's what I was about to say!

5101464
In the mean time I would recommend you pick up some writing guides. There's a multitude on the internet but if you are more into physical copies I can recommend Writing Fantasy and Science Fiction. One of the authors is Orson Scott Card, author of the well known novel Ender's Game.

I f**king hate that movie.

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SOMEHOW MY STORY GOT PUT IN GROUPS THAT I DIDN'T PUT IT IN!

Lol anyone in a group can enter stories made by other people.

5101353 Noone cares about that these days. The mature filter would be more of a problem.

5101593
Actually, I have seen several users get banned for that. It is something that any site with a forum has to enforce.

5101599 But, I've also seen a lot of users be open about it and not get banned.

5101469
We were all about to say it my friend.
We all were.

4924275


Ok, your ten years old. This is what, your first fan fiction? Walk away with this advise. Please get a proof reader/editor to make sure your writing will appeal to others (try looking for editors or something like that). And when the going gets tough don't quit, keep trying and eventually you'll get the hang of it.

You gotta keep writing, not just cancel the whole story. Its gonna get added to random groups. Just roll with it. Free publicity. And once you get really good, go through old chapters and give them a make over.

And lay off the Caps and Caps lock. It gets annoying.

5101588 HOW DO THEY DO IT?!

5101828 OK! JUST WANTED TO KNOW! :twilightblush:

5101851
Is your caps lock button broken? When someone sees texts in all capital letters, it brings forth the idea that the person on the other end is shouting.

5101864 Sorry! I like using caps! :fluttershyouch:

5101882
No need for apologies. :twilightsmile:

5101851 Oh but with the Writer's group, I'm pretty sure their rules are only add your own stories.

5101828

HA! My screen has that same ad in the corner. I find it unsettling.

5102301 What is most unsettling to me is that I have personalised ads turned on.

*pushes the 'DETAIN' button* Your story is wanted for butchering the English language. Glory to Favoritstan. *watches soldier drag the main characters off to the prison center*

This had potential, but got cancelled.

Frozen was terrible and STOP WITH THE DAMN ALLCAPS!

Yes, that was meant to be ironic.

5427501 I liked Frozen...I think they're coming out with asequel actually...

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