This is my first fan-fic so I am open to anything you have to say good or bad. I do have a pretty busy schedule with school and work and all, but I will try to update this story as much as I can. Thanks for your help.
Darkness is spreading over Equestrian. A new foe, unknown to even Celestia is marching on a path of vengeance, and even the elements of Harmony are powerless against him. Twilight learns that there is only one pony who has the skills and knowledge to stop the villain. But there is one problem, no one knows who the pony is or where they are. But Twilight and her friends must act fast, because the darkness grows stronger every second. This is a tale, love, hate, deceit, danger, and most of all darkness.
Additional characters include Discord, Cadence, Shining Armor, and not one but multiple OC's.
A/N: The crossover tag is because I re-purposed a character from a game as the villain. I will put a official authors note at the end of the chapter with his reveal just to make sure there are no copyright issues.
A/N 2: Gore is not present through the entire story, in fact only a few places have gore......just so you know.
Alex Mercer?
Slender?
None of the above.....but good guesses
Daud? Im not good at guessing.
Nope. And just an FYI. The villain I'm using is not exactly like he is in his game. Actually he is rather different. I'm really just using his name, design, and a few key ability's and personality points. But I'll give you a hint. Darkness and nightmares are his hobbies. Three cheers for being vague.
Twilight?
Twilight.
...oh Twilight...
Twilight!
TWILIGHT !?
Twiiiiiiiiiliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight!
Twahlaht.
Twi-what?!
Sorry. I'm kind off going big on the cliff hangers. I really got to stop that.
Hmm, is it Jeff the Killer?
Only one I can think of (and I'm pretty sure he's in a game as well, there's a game named after him!)
Also, since this is your first fic, I would say you did pretty well
Despite the mechanical (capitalization, spelling, grammar, etc) errors, I think you did a fine job on writing.
4918236 no. I think people will be surprised to find out who it is. Also thanks for the support. I really appreciate it.
4917400 twilight? TWILIGHT!? TWIIIILLLIIIIGGHT?!?!? Metal gear solid referances :)
4919900 this is one of the best "first" fanfics i have ever read
4924568 thanks
4926056 no problem
I love the story but some of the errors that are there mess up my reading a bit, i wanted to know if i could spell and grammar check for you?
4927223 that would be great. I was never the best at grammer, and why? People learn English all the time. It aren't that hard
4927568 thanks flare, i dont know why but it drives me nuts when i see a mess up like "Im going to built a statue for celestia." Just a pet peev of mine
4927846 Ya i know. It's weird It annoys the living crap out of me yet it's almost inevitable. you know?
Hey guys, just a quick question. Would you prefer it if posted new chapters once I finish and revise them? Or keep to a scheduled and post each chapter on the same day once a week?
4928306 yup
4928905 wait was that a response to my response of your last post? Or a response the question I posted a hour ago?
4929041 that hadn't popped up yet sorry. But maybe once you revise them you should upload them.
4929293 alright. Can do
Chapter 3 is up. Hope you enjoy it.
I think its going great if a little quick so far.
...And discords thrown into the mix, i hope he doesnt help the enemy like with tirek.
4965434 I will not disclose any information that is imperative to the story in the future.
4965916 im glad you wont.
Great chapter I don't understand why people down vote it though
5048091 guess some people just don't see greatness like others do.
Pretty good chapter like all the rest. Crimsons accent was a bit over done for what most British people sound like now a days but in equestria accents are way over done as you can see with applejack
5099320 thanks. I'm excited to introduce the main plot point to the story. Now things will get really interesting. Thanks for all your support man, I really appreciate it.
5100223 no problem. And i cant wait
Its going great so far, there are a few misspellings here and there though