• Member Since 11th Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 1st, 2013

Blueball-Blitz


hi, i've been reading stories for a while on this site and have decided to jump on the author wagon as well , i write stories mainly on adventure but if requested i would also look into other fanfics

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After waking up from a situation she cannot explain Nightshade: captain of the shadow-bolts finds herself and her team a Millennium ahead of there time. How will they adjust to not being in a world that isn't plagued by war anymore ?, How will they adjust to having to obey a princess that they where ordered to get rid of ? , only one way to find out

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 10 )

Some minor spelling mistakes but they're easily fixed by a beta reader. Otherwise, i'm looking forward to what is to follow.
:ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2:

Also, first.

3033188 thanks for the feedback really appreciated it, i'm currently just at the end of writing the second chapter and should have it posted in the next hour or so, i'll then look over the minor spelling mistakes thanks for pointing them out by the way ! :rainbowwild:

This looks like it is going to be a very interesting story. I don't feel like there are enough Shadowbolt stories out there. I can't wait to see more of this.

3045631 thats exactly the reason i wrote this and don't worry i'm close to finishing the next chapter and it will be up in hour , thank you for your feedback by the way , really appreciate it :pinkiehappy:

please jsut read through your story again and correct your spelling mistakes :fluttercry:
This story is good but with the errors it looks bad...

3046123

will do thanks for pointing the flaws out for me:derpytongue2:, really appreciate the feedback:pinkiehappy:, i will go over it... now actually :scootangel:

I demand more, nothing more, just more

If that makes sense:derpytongue2:

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