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lupin the vapour
Heyo, pegasister here. i also post my stuff under the same name on Fanfiction.net. i'm a submissive lifestyle girl which is why i don't capitalize "i" when refering to myself.. and that's about all...
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Yay! Sorry I failed you.
Life had other plans for me the past few days. Well, this story is terrific, no doubts about that.
Wish you told me this was up. Nice start
4901043 this just got through moderation. I haven't had a chance to tell you, yet. XD
4901101
Well, now you did.
Also, good start.
An excellent start!
So will Twilight die in the end? I'm asking this case I've seen Rated Poystar's concepts of probable endings.
4905725 that's the ending. Can't be posting spoilers, now, can I?
4900956 you're fine. I just wanted to get these out and started so I could have good motivation to keep moving
Me likey. Moar pls.
4916864 workin on it. About half done with the next chapter
Sorry but, this is league related? I just don't see it....
4905725
It's his story now. He can do whatever ending he wants. Not even one of mine
4917109 what? No? My other one is, though. What brought that up?
4927933 Because for some reason this story popped up saying it was added to the group
4927985 no… I just went to check. I must have somehow submitted this one at the same time as my actual League story! How does one undo these sort of goofs, because I have no idea how to delete it from there.
4928242 Not sure. Maybe you can just pm the group owner saying sry u put it there and they would take it out
This has potential... I'm excited.
This was great! When are you going to release the 2nd chapter?
4995535 I'm almost done with it, just been a bit busy lately
5005054 o.o That's... eery... and very appropriate for this, methinks.
rock on, Discord. rock on.
oh shit, i just realized what that could be insinuated for him.
5005169 Insinuating something? Me? NEVER!
5005182
Applejack sees all.
:D Yay! A new chapter! I love the general idea of the story, however, I do look forward to when you have an editor to fix the little mistakes here and there.
I have a suggestion. An anti dark magic group dedicated to the destruction of dark magics that celestia created long ago. I would call them Templars and they are all over zealous in their duties
Of course you could abolish that stupid law your parents created because Twilight did it to save LIVES. You two are the FREAKING DIARCHS OF EQUESTRIA, I'm SURE it would be within your power.
NEW CHAPTER! NEW CHAPTER TONIGHT! This was epic! Rainbow's speech was 100% justified, Discord helping out a friend even after being told he'd be turned to stone again, Rainbow Dash being epic, oh my God there's so much awesome!
I give this chapter 5 Mane 6 members out of 5 (that are not wanted for crimes against Equine):
Of course AJ is the strawman... not like she is ALWAYS the one to play that part.
Bah, anyway... good chapter even with the small mistakes it was still pretty well written without an editor.
5006839 I know, but it was either her or Rarity, and I couldn't get the Rarity version to sound right. Believe me, I love AJ, but she drew the short straw this time.
Anywho, thanks. Hopefully I'll be able to get someone to edit for me soon so I can get better.
5005774 XD high praise, I'm sure. And yeah, I was pretty happy with how Discord's scene turned out
5005561 Even in absolute monarchy's, the ruler is sometimes subject to laws themselves.
So... you need an editor?
I would love to help.
5005054 Mind telling me what that is from?
5005144 Unfortunately, the card, Phyrexian Hulk, is much more underwhelming.
5008066 Number 18. The card is much more underwhelming. Just a poor little 5/4 for 6.
5008089 Thankyou.
5005561 The main problem with that would mean that you are putting a ruler above the law. Even when dealing with immortals this is a bad idea (And sadly even if they do change the law Twilight has already committed the crime and still must be convicted or it is practically the same thing). While Twilight breaking the law only saved innocents if she is not punished then next time she can justify killing one innocent for the sake of a thousand. Slowly she would become more willing to sacrifice innocent lives for little gain until she would become willing to kill simply for convenience and would become a tyrant. Not to mention the story has hinted that Twilight is long lived since Celestia was tempted to stone her
There are actually several major moments in western history that proved the need for this ruling. The Magna Carta comes to mind to be specific.
Edit: Although I do think that the mandatory minimal sentence is bull crap
5014029 comments like yours make me giddy. I love seeing someone think about something I made so thoroughly.
The moral of the story is 'laws are bad'. Chaos forever!
5015136 XD A moral is founded in the end of the story. Middle at the latest. If you'd like the moral for the beginning of the story, then it could be said that it is "Governments are not infallible", but that isn't the point of the story, really
And this is why law should NEVER be absolute, or in other words, nothing should have one single sentence regardless of circumstances lest something like this happen, someone doing something illegal, but for a VERY good reason.
5015694 Then the law would have to define "a good reason" It's very rarely as clear cut as this case is, it's usually more opinionated on the part of the perpetrator, judge, and jury (if applicable). If they just let people get away with it because they believed they were doing the right thing, that would open up a HUGE can of worms. And having someone decide morality of someone else's actions based on the scale of their own beliefs is just as slippery a slope. You honestly get fewer cases of terrible unjust action with hard laws, in my opinion.
ok i understand blood magic is bad but come the fuck on she used her own blood not a victims to start it and only used fallen foes to keep it going and in doing so saved multipul ponies also it was a last ditch effort as she was pretty much running on empty also were the fuck were the other princesses she wouldnt have to do it if it wernt for that
5019922 same place they were during the ursa attack, probably.
5019969 huh just relized you also writing the league crossover story as well cool.......................................... just hurry up plz i like both of these stories
5020082 I'm working on them as quick as I can, but I also do video editing for a YouTube channel. I am so good at limiting current projects!
Hey Luna, welcome to my prick-list for the remainder of this fic
5034306 You've got to remember, she's only following the law. Even if she doesn't like it, the law is the law.
So, I like the concept here, and the summary looks really interesting, but before I read it I have a question: Is this going to be a true tragedy? Or just a sad story? Because I hate reading tragedies, and I don't want to pass up a good story if it isn't going to be tragic.
I ask because someone else asked much the same thing earlier, and you didn't want to spoiler anything by telling them. The problem there is that if this is a true tragedy, the ending is already a foregone conclusion.
5034360 Tragedy doesn't necessarily mean death, but, yeah, I should probably switch that over to Sad. It fits the story as a whole a bit better.
5034370
Fair enough. Though a fatal ending would certainly qualify as tragic. And probably a nicer ending for Twilight than a tragic ending where she lives, lol.
Anyway, off to reading I go, because I'm ok with sad. It's just when it crosses into tragedy that I have to build up my mental fortitude before reading, lol.