Applejack has been helping Elusive fit a dress for a client, and upon her leaving, says a certain phrase. They then discuss what she meant.
A little thing that came from a prompt from Rated Ponystar that I fell in love with. <3
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lupin the vapour
Heyo, pegasister here. i also post my stuff under the same name on Fanfiction.net. i'm a submissive lifestyle girl which is why i don't capitalize "i" when refering to myself.. and that's about all...
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That was a nice story. A bit forward on Elusive's part, but I think you did a great job.
Short, but enjoyable.
Actions speak louder than words, ahaha! I loved this.
It was nice but I can't help wishing it had either been aj/rarity or male aj/elusive. Well written tho!
5031703 Funnily enough, I would have felt more comfortable doing that, but the prompt was Elusive/FemJack. I don't write much m/f romance, usually.
That was new -- seeing only one of them genderswapped! Very sweet, you have my like.
5041684 O.O Ohmygosh! You actually read a thing i wrote, and you commented on it. i keep pinching myself! You're one of my inspirations on here, i love all of your stuff!
5042015 Woo-hoo, I'm finally someone's inspiration!
Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice one shit.
short, sweet, and to the point
5032281 I've wanted to see Elusive/Femjack for a while. I think he would be first to develop an interest, or at least act on it. Good work.
5044540 I laughed like an idiot at that typo.
5042015 Shh, I'm not stalking your lovely story, just rereading it 'cause of boredom.
5112987 Damn, I didn't even realize that typo...eh, i'll keep it. it's pretty funny.
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To be fair stallions are usually expected to be more forward, so it makes that Elusive would see that he would need to make the first move.