The move to Manhattan seemed like a good idea at the time. Rarity had several high profile clients to pursue, while Jack could set up her own business in the city and expand her family's reach. But between the long, grueling work hours, the tedious days ticking on, the pair have had less and less time for each other. And when they do, it usually isn't good.
Their relationship is on the edge of breaking down, both parties mutually unhappy and unfulfilled with their lives. So, in this delicate time, can a simple elevator really offer the key to their happiness?
(Written for my good friend and general all around bro-tier guy, Merc the Jerk. Check his stuff out, 'cause he can seriously write this humanized stuff a lot better than I can.)
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damn, a lot of stories have this name
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Elevating Concerns was too awful as a pun to use.
Will take suggestions for anything better, though.
4071103 that pun is carlos tier
use it brah
don't have any issue with the name currently, just commenting on how many of the same or similarly named fics I've seen
NIce, poor Mac..and where did these humanized names come from? Like was there a meeting I missed?
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First time I saw them used was Troubles in the Big Apple for The Scratchin' Thieves, but I'm not sure if they originated there or not.
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And why are only some of the names humanized but others aren't?
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Because some of them would probably still fit with a humanized setting. Probably.
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Because Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle, and Rainbow Dash are really bad human names, but Rarity is at least passable.
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Rarity Twilight Dash and Mac are all human names. Granted Pinkie's pushing it but you get my point.
Well written, Jake. Here's a fave and an upvote.
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so to make the magic happen, just make the elevator stop, forcing them to confront the problems, then have madly needed sex---with two women that love each other
.....while her friends are watching Rarity and Jack essentially fuck each other hard, had two or three massive orgasms together.....and then the elevator starts again and goes to the ground floor. Where they are welcomed by all their friends..
Seems legit. Lords knows they need it.
Edit: the pervert in me is wanting explicit details and more, even tho I'm not a huge fan of RariJack, but I think that this needs a little more. Maybe more of their realtionship. After the sex in an elevator(which was PAST due, anyway) I would love to see how they continue to rekindle their lesbian relationship (or is it marriage? the way it sound, they sound like they are married).
Just read this for the fourth time. Still good.