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BlindBlossom
When reading my stories, i'd recommed having the font as 'Baskerville Old Face' since I use that when writing my stories. It looks good as well. lol
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You know, I'm iffy on that belief that the stomach is the softest part of a dragon's body. They're apex predators, they would've evolved for conflict, so their stomach is one spot that's easy to target and is facing towards their prey most, so you'd think that spot would evolve the MOST armour, not the least amount.
Poor Spike, Loss of blood is a bitch, hope things work out,
You know, this is rather sweet. I enjoyed it. The only thing that can use work is the formatting, since it looks confusing. But, it's sweet.
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Not necessarily. If you consider that most adult dragons we've see stand on all four limbs, the stomach area would be facing toward the ground, which could easily be defended simply by resting it on the floor.
I am people and I am interested in the sequel
This is pretty good. Grammer and formatting could use some work. I would love to see a sequal.
I would love to see the sequel!
4881369 To be honest I just got the idea from Futurama.
But in future stories i'll do my research before hand. And besides in the sequal i'm working on i'll explain (or spike will) what has happened in his body and i'm gonna include his armor in stuff.
Basically i'll go into more detail.
Hope you enjoyed the story anway.
4893828 I might just be ranting or letting it out here, but I also don't believe that any injury to a dragon is permanent. I mean for a species that lives as long as they have, they might have also evolved the ability to recover from virtually any injury in time. I once watched a documentary about salamanders that lived in a busy waterway, and they constantly had their limbs cut off by boats but had evolved to regrow lost legs and arms so they could keep functioning.
... Okay I'm terribly sorry, but I've always had a love of dragons and want them to be the best I can possibly see them, and I've always wanted to rant on about it somewhere other people can see it. I'm sorry if you didn't want it to be here.
4893891 No no its fine. I understand.
It's my fault like I said I didn't do any research I just took the idea from a show.
I want my readers to enjoy my stories and any information that you can provide is wonderful.
4893910 Good story, no spelling errors, bad capitalization on the letter
That was pretty good......MAKE THE SEQUEL
4881501 Considering that they 'rest' in very rocky mountainous, that would only keep more pressure on their stomach. Rocks are sharp after all.
Found these. Good story.
Don't (work) Spikey, once when (there) done. [worry] [their]
Since( I'm) going to be in this [I'm ]
pretend ( i'm) asleep [I'm]
Not bad. Not bad at all.
The formatting style was kind of annoying, but at least the grammar and spelling was good.
5895018 Yeah sorry 'bout that but i'm still getting use to this website (believe me or not) I still get in trouble for having too many big paragraphs but I intend on improving! (anyway) thanks for the comment~
Really good story. Is there a sequel if there is not can you make one
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