Humans are believed to be fable and myth. Few have a good understanding of what a human "was". War prone, violent, greedy, uncaring of others around them. These understandings have led to the myth being used as a fuel for nightmares. A furless beast that only wanted to kill. Very few know the truth. Humanity thrives in the uncharted and most dangerous areas in the Equestrian borders. The secret of the before times is kept under lock and key by the royal sisters who know what came before their parents rule.
The humans have become a shadow of the new times. Very few have documented what was dubbed "The coming". The event, which happened 600 years ago, left humanity in low numbers, but in brave spirits, which is why few colonies still survive to this day.
What happens next changes everything.
Nice story and great idea to throw in the ghost unit in it
I like this one, It's like a TCB but this time King Cosmos is the reason and Humanity is surviving in the woods.
I really dont like this "humans are evil" thing that you have going on here.
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Humans aren't evil. They're just trying to survive on what's left of their planet.
King Cosmos is quite the pompous asshole, huh?
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Why yes. Good thing he's dead/gone.
The humans surviving in the Everfree actually makes since due to no pony will go there and only a human could survive there. Also the Ghost soldiers, High Five/Bro Hoof! /)
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Not the everfree. Another forest east. Also near "The Rift" which will be explained in the next chapter.
3531462 Alright
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I ment West, not east. Sorry
call of duty
for some reason I thought it was starcraft ghosts (I was playing starcraft all day)
It's not a bad idea, but I don't really think a single Alicorn and the griffons pose much of a threat.
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Jesus, shit will be explained in further chaptes when others are met.
Hi there really like the story so far. I was wondering if you are gonna continue with it?? Waiting to read a conclusion. I really like the ghost references, I think the game was good in my opinion, wether other people agree ?? Also the part where twilight goes back in time , the whole dream sequence of the story, I just wanted to know the small creatures ( humans ) size difference between them and the ponies, which I know is anthro. Keep up the good work, please keep writing and have a good one. Salud
Loving to story only if there's only one chapter, I can't wait for you to continue!
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Well hot damn, im actually working on it now. Ive been away for a long time. Got pushed away from the fandom, but i think i can still make this story good. Ive been planning quite a few things for the characters we know so far and many other twists and turns.
7753563 This really good story will you make more chapters?
Make more... now