I weave a world for the reader to move with. Be it passionate or tragic, heated or suspense, I craft the world. Will you read it?
"Well you've got opportunity in this very community! He's Flim, he's flam, and we're the world famous Flim-Flam Brothers! Traveling Sales-ponies NONPAREIL!
Before they were famous, did anypony ever wonder exactly how they ended up in that spot?
Where did they build the Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000?
Why did they decide to sell cider?
And most of all, why did they learn to become Con-Artists?
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WOW I LOVED THIS STORY ITS THE BEST THAT I EVER READâť•
I like this story
Let me start by saying that I think the story is great and that I really enjoy reading it.
The only thing that I would want to point out right now is that the flashbacks can be a little unclear, in the previous chapter I had to read through the flashback's start a couple of times before I realised it was a flashback. I would suggest using page breaks, or maybe italics to indicate them.
Other than that, keep going!
4858912 Fixed! thanks for that feedback, I went ahead and took your advice!
It's a solid story, I'll give you that much. I did notice a few spelling errors here and there as well as misplaced grammar. I'll give it another go through tomorrow and point out what needs fixing.
Very well written and cute. I love Flim and Flam and this is one of my favourite fics about them. I hope to see more come up soon! Keep it up!