Night Shade, an outcast, is brought to Ponyville by a raging storm that destroyed his home. He soon meets Rainbow Dash who soon finds out that this bat pony isn't as simple as he seems.
Night Shade, an outcast, is brought to Ponyville by a raging storm that destroyed his home. He soon meets Rainbow Dash who soon finds out that this bat pony isn't as simple as he seems.
Nice story. A few little typos but nothing much. Like the idea
It's a good start, it introduces the main character and tells us bit about him.
It's not large chapter but defiantly is better then those who do long chapters.Real keen to see what you do with this storey
Wonderng if there would be any more
(Cleaning out Read Later, this has been sitting since July)