This story is a sequel to All Rainbow And No Colour
NOTE: Highly advised that you read All Rainbow and No Colour first, otherwise you will be very, very lost and confused as to what is happening.
The Rainbow family has thousands of family members in its history, but Rainbow Dash is going to find out something she never even knew, something her parents never told her. She had a brother. Looks like she isn't a lone child, after all.
Where has he been all her life? Where did he go and why did he leave? Only time will answer her questions.
Chapters (15)
Just came across this story and I have one thing to ask, do all your stories use thought quotations for talking quotations? Because I just found that odd.
Interesting story otherwise.
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*glances at other stories to see if your hypothesis is true.* and yes maybe a 99.9 percent on my reader. About thought quotations.
This story needs improvement...
3653460 Well, I noticed that not one member on the site (or as far as I know) has written something with Rainbow having a brother, especially one that has been gone 13 years before she was born and comes back after being gone for so long, so I had the idea of writing this story for you lot.
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I'll keep in touch with this one. I'd like to see where it goes.
...um ...wow?
I, don't know what to say here. Continue I guess, but the pacing just seems a little fast.
3669120 I know the pacing is faster than my other stories, but this was only meant to be a quick one. - but if it becomes necessary, I'll extend the chapters, as well as the book if that is needed to be done.
More truth in about 2 or 3 chapters, okay?
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What? Oh, their good. It was only number 4, I had the problem with.
Y this has no comments? This is a very good story so far.
3678073 Hi again! I never get tired of hearing that! Thank you! Glad you like it! Also, thanks for the watch! javascript:smilie('
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3678092 Elesdo. You know, I gotta ask: why do you put "javascript:simile(':examplenull:')" instead of just ":examplenull:?"
3678112 I just do.
3680005 Okie dokie lokie then.
Why doesn't anypony comment anymore?
3717959 I actually don't know. At least you still read through the updates, and for that, I'm thankful.
I even added this story to 4 groups and only have like 92 views. javascript:smilie('
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3717987 Your welcome. javascript:smilie('
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Why hasn't anypony commented on this yet? This is fucking AwEsOmE! javascript:simile('
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3892263 Nice to see you again! And, I has no idea about that. This is the ONLY story where it mentions Rainbow has a brother she never knew about, and yet, people don't want to read. javascript:smilie('
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3892274 Good to see you too! As for people not wanting to read it, I'm not sure why. Maybe it's the title, or the picture? I'm not sure. Honestly, nothing seems wrong with it. At least, not to me.
3892284 Ugh! Stupid fucking saves! God... I just noticed the chapter didn't save correctly, it cut some out of it. Reload the page and re-read the Strikes Story chapter near the bottom, I corrected it.
3892324 Ummmmm........I kinda meant the story, not the chapter.
AwEsOmE. Just like you!
3936388 javascript:smilie('
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Applejack very accepting on what just happened, feels a little rushed this story
4237997 I know. I think this was my...third(?) story I wrote, and I admit I didn't have a very good writing skill at the time.
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Oh shit... it just hit the fan.
That escalated quickly.
4265347 Did it? Did you even pay attention to how long Strike stayed in Ponyville after saving Rainbow? It has been like 3 or so months!
4265371 I meant the ponynapping to the what they're going to do with her/him,not the gradual escalation.
4265373 ...Seriously...? Capturing Rainbow came earlier than you expected? Ugh...I really dunno what to say to you about it...I'm tired alright! I don't sleep as much as I should, therefore I can't think properly about anything! Hell, I don't even remember the last time I read the story from beginning...
I might actually cancel this story soon due to not many views and stuff. Barely anyone notices the story on this website! javascript:smilie('
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I feel like I'm wasting my time writing it.
4265406 Don't give up. I posted a story on fanfic.net, and I got maybe 50 views in two years. As to the earlier than expected thing, I normally read fanfics that are 47 chapters long, divided into three/four sub chapters a piece, and the action typically doesn't begin to climax until chapter 30 or so. Sorry,not used to reading short fics (even though I write them myself)
4265464 I actually might cancel or delete the story.
I actually can't be bothered with it anymore, as much as I can't give a damn about life or school. javascript:smilie('
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4265472 To be honest, I really enjoy this story. It puts a new spin on R63 Dash. Just... bring it to a close before you delete it. The worst thing for a writer is unfinished work. It just sits at the back of your head nagging, like the most annoying thing you've ever known,multiplied by 100.
4265492 Believe me, it doesn't. The thing that nags at me the most are my thoughts.
Do this, no, do that, no don't do that, do this! GAH!
I really with this story was never even created by me sometimes! I find it more annoying than Pinkie Pie herself sometimes!
4265499 Now that's a scary thought... something more annoying than Pinkie Pie... *shuddr*
No don't cancelled plz
Writing this thing made me think of one thing, and I'm gonna say it right here, right now:
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WHY THE FUCK DID I WRIGHT THIS THING!?!?!?! IT FAILED! IT FAILED ME! IT FAILED YOU! IT FAILED ALL OF YOU! I SUCK AT WRITING THIS THING! ITS THE ONLY ONE OF ITS STORYLINE AND TYPE AND IT IS BARELY NOTICED!
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4390901 Rainbow factory reference, I guess?
AMAZING
Good job. That last bit got me right in the feels. That's actually harder than you'd think. I give you 10/10 squees.
4940678 Thanks, Con.
Not seen you around for a while, but now its my turn. I wanted to finish this one for good, so I did. And even though I'm tired, I'm just going to read through my old stories.
Good to see ya again.
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4940722 Good to see you too, buddy.
THANK U FOR COMING BACK WIITH THIS STORY!!!!!!
I approve of this ending as well.
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Right in the feels.
9 of 9 squees.
Um... I'm confused. Both this story and the sequel say they are both sequels to each other. What's going on?
5169921 This one is the second one - the sequel - and All Rainbow and No Colour is the prequel. The Long Lost Rainbow takes place after All Rainbow and No Colour.
All Rainbow and No Colour is basically of Strike's life with Remedy after what happened to him.
its a nice story so far, cant wait to read more
wow first comment! this is the first time ive been first to comment!