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Burning Song has lived her whole life alone and when she was moves to Ponyville and meets a stallion. Her heart burns with love for that stallion. But will she be able to tell this stallion what she fells for him when she doesn't know if he fells the same?

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Comments ( 4 )

It's progressing rather well, I enjoy it. You've done well to portray characters in a small amount of words, something which I respect about your writing. Good luck in your future writing endeavors. :pinkiehappy:

2939109 Thank you! I would love to here more from you! I will write more and more stories and chapters. :yay:

AND THE PLOT THICKENS! DUN-DUN-DAAA! Yes, I was meant to write it like that. Again, really well done; I'm looking forward to how Campfire would exactly break Song's heart. Also, Pinkie's line was well written, as if she was actually there. Anyway, that's all I have to say; I give you a gold star for giving out another Grade A chapter. :twilightsmile:

3050500 Thanks again! Hey just a little something, remember the sparkle in Song's eyes in chapter 2? Well, that might be leading up to something...:raritywink:

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