Twilight suspects that something is wrong with Celestia after her brother's wedding. There is--something very, very wrong, but unfortunately, solving the problem will not be nearly as simple as she expected.
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Well, I'm intrigued...
Something must be seriously wrong for the princesses to give Twilight the cold shoulder like that; it doesn't seem like them at all. Colour me intrigued.
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Thanks! Good to know someone's interested.
That, and the personal tension of Luna's warning to Twilight, are quite a nice hook. I'm not sure you've sold Twilight's need to handle this alone — wouldn't her friends be more inclined to believe her, after she punched open the changeling conspiracy? — but let's see where this goes.
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Thank you!
And yes, now that you mention it, I suppose they would. It was more of just a fleeting thought to push her towards the suspicion that Chrysalis had replaced Celestia. Then she just wanted to gather some intel on her own to make sure because, well, one pony is quieter than six.
I'm glad I faved this story when i did,
now please show me where this raw potential of a plot is heading 
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I shall.
Thanks so much!
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Glad you're interested!
And we shall see about that...
I like dark, but I don't generally go for such things set in the present. Too hard to get right, and too easy to go overboard. You've struck a note of unnerving which resonates well. Looking forward to see where this develops, once it gets into gear.
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I'm pretty sure, considering the experience you seem to have, that that is literally the best compliment I have ever received.
So thank you and I'll keep that in mind!
Well, okay, hyperbolically. But still.