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This story is a sequel to The Royal Break Up Chronicles
Teen and sex rating is for swear words and sexual comments
A What-If to Luna's Original Break Up Chronicle.
Instead of lying and continuously chasing down Steven after their break up, Luna chooses to leave him be. This however has unforeseen side effects on Steven, causing him to see, hear and feel the Lunar Princess wherever he goes.
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Read it on fanfic.net, it's so perfect ;-;
I wish I had your writing ability.
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You flatter me
Bug-Fixing Time! [DONE]
are, not am
Probably just put the whole thing in quotation marks.
Not sure what kind of punctuation you want here, but it is lacking.
Missing a word, why are we here?
Who are you and what have you done with Zam!?
I mean, writing a non-dark story in which no princess gets bashed just isn't normal behavior for him 
Still a good story, even if it doesn't fall within your normal area of expertise. Still, it feels like it's missing something. Though, that might just be because I don't generally like one-shots. They leave so much of a world left to be discovered, it's evil how that potential just gets wasted
I think it's damn, but not sure if this works too.
Also there were commas missing here and there.
I liked it :D
I enjoyed the first version of this but loved this one a just a smidgen more.
Wow, that was uncharacteristically nice of you...
Who are you? Not a single princess was bashed here!
lovely
time for some non dark zam stories. was gonna ask why its not on the royal break up stories but its says over there they're gonna be separate
finally a happy ending.
Well this was pretty touching. Though i would've liked it to be longer... but good things have to end sometimes :)
Good job :)
4746889 same here, iv'e been stalk, I mean, following you since you started with your original version of a princesses' sin and I cry myself to sleep, I MEAN i read them before going to bed knowing you are way more awesome then i am.
Bravo. Good, touching story. Now if only you responded to your fan mail.
If I was him I would ignore it.
*slow clap* Perfection.
Damnit... You made my heart twist a bit, like 20 degrees to the left.
It's not supposed to do that.
This, this, is somewhat like what I've been fucking looking for. It's a shame you didn't make a "novel" and use something like this, because this was fucking perfect.
Hey Zamiriac, I hate to be that guy but couldn't this have been added to the fic you already have rather than making a whole new story for it? :x
I mean, I'm just saying that fic could use an update rather than a spinoff which is really just an alternate ending...
I prefer this ending as opposed to the original.
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You... You are awesome. Beautiful story. Very nice ending.
What the f*** do you have against Luna?
Other than that, this is a great story.
I'm sorry but I do have to agree to what's previously been said. Why is this a oneshot/alternate ending thing?! There's so much potential it practically ooze's the shit! I don't know if I'm just a selfish fuck or what but moar plz. It's like being at a gem mine you think you get gold but it's fools gold. There's this pretty shimmer and excitement but then you see it's just the aforementioned fools gold, and all that excitement just dies away....
Also, great fucking writing as usual and I can't wait for more!
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Was this intentional?
...So many emotions are spinning. All I have to say is this. Wow.
Oh fuck... That ending actually touched my petrified heart. It was overall a good oneshot to me, although that ending leaves so many questions unanswered! Will they be together again? What happens next? Who was that 'Luna' that followed Steven around? Did they ever get that cinnamon bun? Is Luna really sexy when she's mad? Did red team ever pay for drinks? And why, oh god why, am I asking YOU this?
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Well this was a nice change of pace. If the illusion Luna was just an illusion of Steven's subconsciousness then how did she know about Luna and the photo? Still I like this story.
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Fresh?
I wouldn't say that word was entirely appropriate. His stories are certainly detailed; as well as a pleasure to read through. Problem is, they're all practically the same.
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It does say in TRBC that he's doing chronicles as separate things now.
why are your stories so Perfect
I don't think there's a single story of yours I've read that I haven't liked.
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They do tend to gravitate around similar concepts yes, but are not the same
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what's TRBC?
Edit: Derp, I'm an idiot. ABBREVIATIONS
Still, I think there's a rule against making alternate endings into their own stories... :x
Ahhh, cinnamon ghost, we meet again.
An entity that presents itself in the form of our true love after we've left them and viciously excels at it's task by guiding us back to those we had lost...or it's just a plot-point in an alternate ending to a My Little Pony fanfiction.
I'm cool either way, really.
Well played, Zamairiac...Well played
As expected your work is always beautiful
As expected your work is always beautiful
This was perfect as always. Great job!
Well played good sir, and a good read to alleviate the "Bad Timing" I've ben have all month.
Wow.
It's been a really long time since I've felt my feels stir up like that. Thumbs up, fave, and all the props to you. This is simply fucking beautiful.
Well written sir, well written indeed.
Cover art is kinddd of fucking adorable.
This ending is much better than the original. Love it.
Well written sir...*clap*... well written. *clap* *clap*
This was... Truly incredible, Very moving and deep. I love it.
Great, but one thing that bugged me- he's talking to an invisible pony, shouting even, and no-pony notices at all? Seems a bit strange.
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He did not want to be noticed or remembered, so magic made it happen.
The Not-Luna say's as much towards the end
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But that means that everything can be explained with a shrug and "Equestria- a magical land filled with talking ponies. They can do whatever the fuck they want, even shitting all over physics.”
:(