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Zamairiac


A somewhat well known author, who is also well known for his inconsistent upload schedule. (My Patreon!)

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This story came from an idea I blogged about a while back. Some of the details will change and have changed, but it has the basic gist of what I have planned.

Go check my third latest blog to find out :D

Celestia was betrayed by Discord many years ago, tricked into believing that Equis's doom was nigh.

The result was each and every sapient inhabitant on the planet moving to an uninhabited world, but Celestia being left behind as a consequence.

And yet as the years pass on by and nothing changes...something does.

Read on as the mare recalls what she can, whilst fighting her gradual slip into a false reality.

Where a young human is her son.

Where the impossibility is explained as a gift from The Great Mother herself.

Where memories fade and delusions take their place.

Or have they already?

This story is a small prologue of sorts to an upcoming story simply called Mother?. It's just a drabble I magicked up in an hour or so, hope you enjoy it.

If anyone has a better picture then send it my way please :)

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Comments ( 75 )

Can ya finish your other stories instead of making these one shots? While I appreciate your stories, I just ask that you finish your other stories before making new ones.

Velvet Sparkle, worst pony conformed. :eeyup:

Brilliant as always
Would you kindly make the sequel?

It was a pretty decent piece, I'll admit.
But I'd rather see an update of, to be honest at this point, any of your other stories.

4002788

Working on it.

Hard to write something when you can't figure out how to write it :derpytongue2:

4002813

After I've finished The Interrogation, sure :twilightsmile:

4002845
Yeah, I guess that would be a problem...

4002852

I'm bout a quarter done with Interrogation, shouldn't be long now :twilightsheepish:

Insane overly motherly alicorn FTW!

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Great! While I'm always sad to see a story finish, All stories have to end sometime.

4002864

I do try to finish them, but idea's get inside my head and the next thing I know...well.

There's another story added to the pile XD

Luckily this one is done :rainbowlaugh:

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It's great that you have so many ideas, but don't abandon one project for another while it's still in its prime.

4002845

Fair point mate :twilightsheepish:

Though I'm glad this was just a one-shot. Saves waiting for more chapters that might not come...no offense XD

Now get working private! :flutterrage:

4002788 Tell that to RainbowBob.

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RainbowBob is the worst making more than two chapters.

Not sure if I should read this or not, looks to me like a mind fuck story :unsuresweetie:
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Fuck lets do this! :pinkiecrazy:

Noal #18 · Feb 26th, 2014 · · 7 ·

I will say this one more time finish endless nightmare. please

Aaaaah, nothing like a new fic from one of my fav authors, this made my night.
Can't wait to see where this will go, as much as i love crazy jealous girlfriends stories, crazy overprotective mothers are fun as well.

4003088

I'll finish it in my own damn time, thank you very much :unsuresweetie:

I say you start working on the 'Mother' story at once! Post Haste! Or at least do what a few people do and juggle two stories at once.

4003286 I almost forgot about that story....erm....yea imma go read it now.

Noal #23 · Feb 26th, 2014 · · 2 ·

4003286 I'm sorry for being an ass I just want it to be finished. :(

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Check recent blog :derpytongue2:

Well yeah, there's the idea. I've yet to read a fic where something like this happens. So a point for originality goes to moi!

I think there was a fic where this idea was given a more malevolent approach, where Celestia took a human from Earth, transformed their mind and body into "her" child, was real controversial while it was on the featured box

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Not sure you read the right blog mate :twilightoops:

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Though I would like to find that story...sounds like fun :pinkiehappy:

4003801 I didn't say it was exactly like your idea, just struck me as similar

4003846

I've read that one...it made me slightly :pinkiesick:

I LOVE YOU WORK...



P.s. him going to make a compilation book, if that ok:fluttershyouch:.

Holy balls this was awesome!
Can't wait to read "Mother?" now...:pinkiecrazy:

And what is even more impressive is that you actually made me feel sorry for Celestia.
I mean damn, just read out loud her monologue. She just snapped and I can't help but feel for her.
Being fooled by a supposed friend and end up exiled with only memories of her loved ones as company... shit.
*old man voice*
Young folk snapped for way less in my day.

OH MY GOD! YOU FINALLY MADE A ONE SHOT STORY!:pinkiegasp:

Although....technically this is just a prologue to the other story.:trollestia: Not sure why you don't put it here instead of making it a separate story.

you done it again....bravo.

"The mind of the subject will desperately struggle to create memories where none exist..." - Rosalind Lutece

I can't even keep track of what characters I like. Your last story with her and her "son" well lets just say I wanted her to get an ass whopping from Chrissy.Now all I can do is feel sorry for her. Damn it she deserves better but also worse my God my feels hurt.

Great uh prequel to whatever you got coming.
I'm still looking forward to that dragon story.
Oh and since I say this in nearly all of my posts... some delicious Luna plot would be a nice addition.

4004484 Booker: -drunken slur- Yea well you can go fuck yourself selves? I got rowed in a rowboat for hours *hic* just to lose the gun to meet the mostss awesome chick ever then you blow it all up with *hic* science.
Elizabeth: Booker go lie down.
Booker: I'm not *hic* done bitchin yet and another thing -thud-

To Be Continued In…

the last time i read that was in To help thy lonely soul and im still waiting:ajbemused:

Grrrr I hate Celestia

Can't tell thoughts from action. Italize it n shit

Creepy thought: Will the Cornition or whatever that instinct from Never Judge is called be involved? They aren't related biologically, but this Celestia is insane from lack of social contact.

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Compilation book? :rainbowhuh:

4006059 A book that have all of your story I use a site like this so I can read them at anytime anywhere.

When i don't favorite one of your stories will be the day pigs fly, the pond scum will become a human, animals will rule the earth, and obama care will actually work.


Needless to say i <3 this

4009083 Obama care actually working, lol. I heard that there are at least 5 fake sites already and the real one is the only one that doesn't work! :facehoof:
wow...
The story was rather creepy if you ask me... I didn't like it too much, but then again, I don't like depressing stuff so it's my own fault :facehoof::facehoof:

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