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A Spell Gone Right

Rarity and Fluttershy head to the Castle of the Royal Pony Sisters to find books to master a spell Rarity was working on. But, what happens next is completely unexpected to the unicorn and pegasus.

In alternate dimension, the same thing happens, but to who...? What adventures will happen to Rarity and Fluttershy when the unexpected happens?

Read the story to find out! I barely know what's
happening next!

Contains genderbent ponies and such.

Chapters (2)

Chaper 1: I Did A Thing! · 22nd Jul 2014 · 1,928 words
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Chapter 2: Meeting Ourselves and Such · 23rd Jul 2014 · 1,405 words
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garfan

garfan #1 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · · Chapter 2: Meeting Ourselves and Such ·

don't know what sort of writing criticism you welcome if any, but I'd just like to say I don't see Rarity or really anyone referring to the CMC as the CMC vocally. They'd say the full words or say shorten it to Crusaders or something like that