• Published 22nd Jul 2014
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A Spell Gone Right - A Rainbow Narwhale



Rarity and Fluttershy head to The Castle of the Royal Pony Sisters for some books to perfect a spell Rarity was working on. But, what results of the spell os completely unintentional.

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Chapter 2: Meeting Ourselves and Such

~~~~~~~back to Rarity and Flutters' dimension ~~~~~~~

Rarity was so utterly confused on what happened. She blinked a few times to process what just happened, then she turned her fainted friend Fluttershy. She grabbed a bucket of water that was conveniently placed nearby, probably Pinkie's doing, and dumped it on Fluttershy.

Fluttershy woke up with a jolt and started flailing her forelegs wildly. She stopped for a moment to take in her surroundings, then she remembered where she was and what happened.

"Um, Rarity..." Fluttershy started, "What just happened?"

"I have no idea." Replied Rarity with a bit of concern as she glanced at the newly open portal to whoknowswhere. "But, I can't wait to see where it goes!" Her tone went from concerned to adventurous faster that Rainbow Dash could clear the sky.

"What was the spell supposed to do?" Asked Fluttershy.

"It was supposed to created fabrics and such out of thin air," Rarity explained, "Sweetie Belle drained my extra savings with some CMC stunt."

"Oh, ok. Well, since we don't know what's on the other side, we shouldn't go in it" Fluttershy said backing up from the portal and going back to the original topic.

"What's the fun in that?" Rarity complained, starting up her horn and levitating Fluttershy with her magic, "We're going to just take a peak, then we'll be right back."

"OK... But if I get even a teensy bit scared, I'm leaving."

Rarity then walked straight into the newly made portal with the cowering Fluttershy in her telekinetic grip.

~~~~~Back in the alternate dimension just a few minutes before ~~~~~

"Oh for goodness sake." The unicorn said while dumping a bucket of water on his fainted friend.

The pegasus woke up in a jolt and looked around confused.

"Oh... It wasn't a dream..." Said the pegasus glumly.

"Well obviously it wasn't, you don't faint in dreams." Said the snooty unicorn with a snooty tone, "Now we're going to go get D-"

The unicorn was interrupted by two figures coming through the portal. The unicorn stared blankly at what he was witnessing and the Pegasus hid behind him, trying to hide behind is mane.

"Quick hide." He instructed the pegasus and they both hide behind a table, some chairs, and stacks of books, books and more books.

"Well, it looks absolutely the same as where we came from." Complained Rarity, who came out of the portal.

"Um, maybe it doesn't do anything." Suggested Fluttershy who was being held by the unicorn mare's magic still, "and, can you put me down?"

Rarity placed Fluttershy gently on the ground and cancelled her telekinetic power.

"I doubt it," retorted Rarity, "maybe it sent us back a few hours or-"

Fluttershy stopped paying attention to Rarity and started looking around the library to see if anything was different. She then looked into the direction the stallions were hiding in. Then she looked at her friend and opened her mouth to speak.

"Um... Rarity?" Said the Fluttershy, "there's two stallions over there." She pointed over to the area where the stallions were hiding.

At that moment, Rarity stopped blabbering on and looked over to where her pegasus friend was pointing. And looked straight at the stallions.

"Greetings!" Rarity said waving at the stallions with a hoof, "Come out from your hiding place and introduce yourselves!"

The stallions looked at each other then walked out of their hiding spot.

"Who are you?" Asked the unicorn stallion, "and why do you look like us?"

"Well, why do you look like us?" Replied Rarity.

While the two unicorns argued, the two pegasi were looking at each other quizzically, hiding behind their manes, and moving their hooves in circles like fillies messing with their reflections.

"This is getting us nowhere." complained Rarity.

"Agreed." Said the unicorn stallion.

"Well, I am Rarity," said Rarity, then pointed at Fluttershy, "and that is my friend, Fluttershy."

"Nice to meet you Miss Rarity," said the unicorn stallion smiling, "I am Elusive and that-" Elusive points at the pegasus stallion, "-is Butterscotch."

"Nice to make your acquaintance Sir Elusive." Rarity said smiling at him.

Meanwhile, over where Fluttershy is...

"Um...hi..." Says Fluttershy very quietly.

"Hi..." Says the pegasus colt very quietly.

'Oh wow, he heard me? That never happens on the first meetup' thought Fluttershy.

"I'm... Fluttershy..." Fluttershy said, very very very very quietly.

"I'm Butterscotch..." Said Butterscotch very very very very quietly.

'Very awkward! Am I right narrator?!' Pinkie said to the Author/Narrator...

Pinkie Pie! Get out of here! You're NOT in this scene! Or FanFic for that matter!

'Sorry, gosh!'

Anyway...

"Elusive?! Butterscotch?! You guys here?!" Shouted a voice from down the hall.
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"Who's that?" Asked Rarity, peering down the hall.

"Oh um, its nopony," Said Elusive blocking the doorway a bit, "But, we might want to get out of here."

"Why?" Rarity started, "Is it a fri-"

Rarity was interrupted by a pink earth pony stallion bouncing into the room and shouting:

"Oh there you are 'Lucy and scotch!"

"I told you not to call me that." Said Elusive through closed teeth, with a stare that could melt ice.

'Hey narrator,' thought the earth pony, 'how come you didn't introduce me yet?'

I'm getting to that! Gosh! And don't start breaking the fourth wall!

'OK, fine. I'll stop. But only for this chapter.'

Deal, now back to the story.

Fluttershy and Butterscotch walked over to the unicorns and earth pony, just so they wouldn't miss any information. It would be rude to ask later.

"Rarity and Fluttershy, this is Bubble Berry." Explained Elusive, "He's a bit hyper."

"Hi there Fluttershy and Rarity!" Said Bubble Berry happily, and while shaking their hooves, "Areyounewtotown?becauseifyou'renewtotownthatmeansidontknowyou,andifidontknowyouthatmeansyoumustnothavefriendsinthistown,andifyoudonthavefriendsthatmustmeanyou'relonely,andifyourlonelythatmeansyouneedtobecheredup!andifyouneedtobecheeredupthatmeansyouneedtohaveapartythrowforyou!" He said in one breath.

"Um, well actually we are kinda new," started Fluttershy, "But, we don't need a party thrown." Fluttershy paused for a moment. "I-if that's okay with you..."

"Don't be silly! Everypony loves parties! And everypony loves a Bubble Berry party! So, I insist!" Said Bubble Berry in a rush.

"Well, if you do insist, you can throw a party for us." Fluttershy said, like the doormat she is.

"Yay! This is gonna be awesome! It might take me a few hours to get everything ready! So you guys can explore, and make more friends here! Well, besides 'Lucy and scotch." Bubble ranted on again, but bouncing up and down, "Anyway, bye bye for now!" Bubble Berry bounced out of the room.

"This might cause a problem..." Said Elusive staring at the doorway.

"How so?" Rarity asked.

"Well, you two are obviously us, from another dimension," started Elusive, "and one of our friends can get a bit paranoid about this stuff."

'Tell me about it' thought Rarity

"We'll cross that bridge when we get to it."

"You sure?"

"Positive"

The two unicorns and two pegasi then started walking out of the old castle and into the Everfree forest, towards Ponyville. But, one thing the mares didn't account for was then portal closing a couple minutes after they left. And neither knew how to open it again.

'Dun Dun Dun!' Said Berry....

Dang it Berry! Stop breaking the fourth wall!

'Aw... But the chapter is over!' Complained the party pony.

Now I got to keep. This chapter going because you made it awkward!

'Sorrrryyyyy'

You should be!

'Hey can I have my own spinoff chapter in the future?!?'

Maybe....

*nudge nudge* *wink wink* *hint hint*

Author's Note:

Two Chapters in one day?!
What is the sorcery?!?

The truth is, I had the first chapter sitting somewhere for a couple days, and
This one in the works for about 2days, so here you guys go!

Anyways, I hoped you guys enjoyed this chapter.

Oh and Berry will get a spinoff chapter(s) soon....

Comments ( 1 )

don't know what sort of writing criticism you welcome if any, but I'd just like to say I don't see Rarity or really anyone referring to the CMC as the CMC vocally. They'd say the full words or say shorten it to Crusaders or something like that

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