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havent read this one yet though. still trying to get used to the whole M/M idea
your first chapter was amazing and the second was too untill the clop which i didnt read because i dont like it also damn you for keeping me away from writing my story
not actually damning you of course, your story was just distracting
Oh. Mai. Celestia.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
Very good :) Big Mac and Caramel are by far my favourite couple (with Braeburn and Soarin' a close second) and this was good. To be honest I'm still getting used to the idea of this being about a human and ponies
However I'm sure I'll come round :D It was written really well but my only problem was that I imagine Caramel as having no accent rather than a weak country one. That's just my personal opinion though so I can't fault you for that
Loving your stories so far and can't wait to see even more from you! ![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Hmmm...
Yes.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
We need more gay male pony stories
i probably missed your authors comment, but did this get any inspiration from an author named MetalHooves?
seems to be spot on his kind of work.
Well SwipertheFox. You just inspired me to write a story about an Oc of mine and Caramel. THATS how AMAZING this two chapter story was. Wow. I mean WOW. I have never been inspired by someone to write a story. YOU sir are a god.
Oh, and if ya own the pic can i use what Mel (Great NOW I'm callin' him by a nickname) says on the pic, in the story you inspired me to write? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
Thanks for all of the comments! I loved writing this part, having Caramel just coming across as such a super cute and wonderful stallion.![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
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Give in to your urges!
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Thanks for reading. I hope you own writings works out well.
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I'm glad that you love it! Have you ever read my Braeburn story, Getting Braeburned? It's like this only more on the romantic side.
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YES! YES! YES!
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All of my second-person human stories are in the same universe, more or less, yes. Humans are regarded as oddities that pop in every once in a long while. They're treated, I suppose, with a bit of fear, curiosity, derision, and wonderment all mixed in. I would think that Celestia's policy is to let each human live their life in Equestria as they see fit, with the same rights as any mere pony, but she'd keep knoweldge of inter-dimenonal travel (the mechanics of it, details) hidden to protect the public.
Thanks for noticing that.![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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Hell. Yes.
i just thought of something. you know how everypony says theyre gay for braeburn/spitfire, what would happen if those 2 were shipped?
![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
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Oooooh, that's nice.
I'm comitted to do a![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
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fic, but I'll certaintly think about that.
I'm actually wondering if another human-x-pony story, about a lucky guy with Soarin', would work...
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but I think that's it a great thing to use for insipiration. Anyways, I'm happy that you felt inspired by my work. ![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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I don't own the pic
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I've heard of MetalHooves, but I've never read his or her work. I guess it's a case of independent thinking, probably liking the same sort of mix of lovey-dovey romantic language with explicit, detailed sexual scenes that I adore.
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Yes I have and that was also a brilliant story :) Also, to add to a comment you have made recently
"I'm actually wondering if another human-x-pony story, about a lucky guy with Soarin', would work..."
Please, In the name of Celestia do it! If I would want anypony it'd be soarin!
:L Just throwing tha out there ![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
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Yes, 2nd person Human X Soarin' clop please!
Mmm. I really should plead YKINMK on this chocolate-covered sausage-fest. Repeat my usual criticisms of 1) why are your characters so strangely eager?* and 2) I can't feel the orientation of their bodies, so get confused - bouncing around from act to act with no real communication = too fast and disorienting to enjoy.
That said, the non-sex interactions are very nice, as usual.
*perhaps another YKINMK. I'm rather demisexual myself.
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"Chocolate-covered sausage-fest" is such an awesome turn of phrase, I should title my next fic that... thanks.
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Uh-oh. Can I please not get credit for that one?
Pretty please?
Oh, and today my muse presented me with something she insists is "the first rule of clop:"
All sex scenes are conversations. If necessary, the characters should use words.
Seems legit to me. What do you think?
Also, Nightmare Date is on my reading list for tomorrow. Thanks for making my day go by just a little faster.
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Uh, okay... I promise to just give myself credit then.
As for the rule, I don't think it's that helpful. Maybe I'm not understanding it right, though.![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
I'm going to be honest and say that I expect you to mostly dislike Nightmare Date, with the exception of the grimdark alternative ending and the troll/comedy ending. It's essentially wish-fulfillment goo side of having a nerd unicorn and evil princess of the endless night fall in love, yeah.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
On the other hand, you liked Avalon, which is about a nerd unicorn and a grey pegasus with unique and beautiful eyesfalling in love in wish-fufillment goo style... So, I'm curious. I do feel proud of writing both Avalon and Nightmare Date, since I think those 'dawwwwwwwww'-ish romances have touched a lot of people. It's touched me.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
This is really going goodI like ur fics. Another Thumbs up.
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"You hear your white stuff bubbling out of Caramel's flanks"
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Have to say I enjoyed this very much
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Thanks for reading and for the fav!
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Needs to be tagged Human.