• Member Since 16th Jan, 2012
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SwiperTheFox


This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.

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Every animal is a friend to Fluttershy. She made that vow and she plans to keep it, even if this new creature looks and acts like something from a little foal's cartoon and also seems to have dropped out from a whole other world. This yellowish-green bird-like thing pops up out of Everfree Forest with a tag named "Sweet Jane" and an address leading to "The Factory" in "New York, New York", which Fluttershy has never heard of. Fluttershy can't understand a word it says, but it clearly seems to want to go back home as well as make music. If only Fluttershy could find this Lou Reed character that owns Sweet Jane.

I'm hoping that this odd little idea, coming from a mix of watching Lilo & Stitch, reacting to Human in Equestria cliches, and my current Velvet Underground obsession, breaks my current writer's block. Picture credits to Esark Design: http://esharkdesign.com/index.php/about/ Check him out.

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Comments ( 3 )

Well, I can't find anything wrong with this! The grammar is sound, the plot is original, and dat picture!!!!

Write on.

I am adding it to "Read Later" list... since I am a bit busy now. But, I don't understand why it has very few views and 1 comment? The plot seems nice. I don't think it is all shitty and like that... I guess it is nice... I will edit this comment after I read it. Weird... A shittier fiction got more views and reviews... (of course the review is really bad...) just look at this weird one: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/33312/Jail
LOL that fiction is sooo funny.... I mean FAIL... it is tagged as dark.. but I ROFL-d through the ending and after reading it...:rainbowlaugh:

this story sucks huhuhuhuh

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