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Dark0592
Here lies the wistful delusions of the sleep addled mind. Actually wait, no, just me.
Dark0592
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I know, the Epilogue before the story is kinda weird but bear with me...the actual thing needs to be rewritten and edited so it might not be up for a day or two after the story approves
I thought one of the sites rules was to not post NSFW story images?
I salute thee and belch at all the jerks disliking this story.
I haven't actually read this fic yet or even the real Rainbow factory (haven't had the time) but I KNOW two highly possible reasons why your fic so far has been dissliked so much so far. (I have at least added both this and the real Rainbow factory to the read later tab)
1. Incomplete
2. ''Rip-off'' of the real Rainbow factory despite that you wrote that this is your own version.
How do I know this? Cuz bronies reacted the same-buckin'-way to my own writen version of Cupcakes.
All this said, I'm gonna like this story so that the disslike bar shrinks a little bit.
439036 I don't see why people make such a fuss over gore fics. They make out that gore is a bad thing, but it isn't. It's simply catering to a minority within the fandom. It's not like the authors are forcing people to read their stories. If you don't like gore, don't read gore stories. Simple.
Now, let's give Scootaloo a firecracker and see what happens
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Tell me your trolling, please. My already dwindling faith in humanity cannot take another hit such as this.
439146 Uhm... I don't recall saying I don't like gorefics. Especially since I've written one myself.
Sure, I'm not crazy 'bout gore or the like, I'm more for comedy or romance.
Point is, YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID!
439218 I never said that you didn't like gore. I was just making a point about other people's reactions to gore.
Bring on the gore
439032 doesn't even know what NSFW means 439202 it's not trolling, I'm actually turning rainbow factory into a somewhat happy ending (not that kind of happy ending) so it's not too bad.439036 thanks for the support, but if people dislike this because I don't have it complete they aren't people actually wanting to read this, they're just griefing... as for the "rip off" this actually isn't a rip off. it's just what I think should have happened in that particular universe. reading my story-when it get uploaded- will be a very different story than the original rainbow factory with only minor similarities
439975
Do you. Perchance. Has some form of aspergers syndrome?
Everything about this is hilarious for all the wrong reasons.
Whatever the hell it is you're doing, please keep doing it.
439975 I know your story isn't a rip-off, mine is neither, but people tend to call them rip-offs, just because of the similarities.
Reviewed your fanfiction: Link
492111 so you go around reviewing and hating on all of these fics? thanks. you can't even call them reviews, because the only one you gave a passable review on was the original. and barely that, all I saw for that entire page was nothing but hate. if you're going to review something, you give the good and the bad, and then your opinion...not "Oh look at this shitty fanfic, I'm not even going to read it!". and with the review for this story, "Emo spank material"...really dude? the only people that are bigger morons than you are the people that listen to you
516119 I think you're just mad because I took your Kit-Kat bar.
516283 i am mad that you gave me a bad review, but i can deal with that. but you just troll...not single positive remark on anything
Why all the downrates? I like the original too, but this one is just as good if not slightly better.
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actually this ones actually alot happier than the first one tho i do have something to say its still strange and weak to make rainbows out of living pony's.
i'd say that one fic where thy made rainbows from the energy released from the throws of passion.I.E. rainbaloo being pretty awsome.
548649 I don't like that fact too much either, but I had to keep that in or it wouldn't hold up to being what it's intended to be, an Alternate Rainbow Factory. but that alternate rainbow making thing...if that's what I think you're saying...that's just...wrong
548656 maby i didn't phrase it right no i didn't even do it justice actually the experiments would be volunteers in trouth the experiment only involves sensors energy absorbers a blank room and participants usually lovers and theyer all volunteers the energy aborbed from the visible release of emotions from the couples would be ten times that of the specral energy's released by the slane. anyway its basically a way of encouraging mating amongst lovers. no its not something cruel its something nice sorry if it came out wrong the first time. if you still dont like it then its all on you.
548711 there's kind of a line you gotta draw for fanfiction...the line is even closer for fimfiction...that concept is a nice one I admit, but it's just between those two lines, meaning where it's just wrong for Ponies...
understandable strange i'm always somehow on the line on these kind of subjects but i can understand your worries thanks for letting me know
548807
548807 hay dark i found the story i was looking for the one that involved the idea its actually pretty good Here you might like it you might not but its pretty good and its verry unlike the regular rainbow factory
have fun
this is a very interesting spin makes the rainbow factory seem less ooh i dunno scary maybe not sure though
kumquat kumquat kumquat that really is a funny word to say
a nightmare turned into a dream. thank you.
1461166 well that's one way to put it... glad you liked it
i love it. you are awesome.
If you only knew what came next dear scoots R.I.P.
Well, the order between the chapters 'Epilogue' and 'You Have Beautiful Eyes' made me go derp?
but managed to follow along. It may not be as great as the original, but I don't care what others say, I find it very interesting and worth reading. I couldn't help but notice that this story is "incomplete" and all the chapter's are dated a year ago. In the name of Celestia 
could you please continue... th... th-that is if you want I mean. 
Liked, Faved, and Moustached
2780067 is it incomplete? damn, sorry for getting your hopes up. that's my own inattentiveness.
and this wasn't meant to be like the original. this is sleep deprived dark's mind after seeing the cover pic
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Oh...
tha...that's quite alright 
Well writen, I'll give you that much.
Unfortunatly, i didn't quite get what was going on. Perhaps that was my fault. I am in no position to dislike the story due to the fact that there is nothing bad about it. The plot was desent and the descriptions were great. You hold plenty of potential, keep it up!
Who the hell liked this shitty ripoff
5368475 the story's shit anyways
492111
516119 erm... I think two of the chapters are out of proper order
I think an appropriate punishment for them would be cutting off there wings and doing whatever you can to make sure they live as long as possible while keeping them conscious.
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I like the story but the chapter order needs to be fixed. It was very confusing the first time i read it.
They are.