Twilight wakes up after what can arguably be called the best sleep that she’s ever had. Eager to share the bliss of this perfect day, she proceeds to wake up Spike before going on a musical rant through town. But something's wrong with the ponies of Ponyville. Everypony's all mixed up but nopony realizes it. Her perfect day is ruined, and now she has to fix it.
Can Twilight figure it out before she's too frustrated to care.
Thanks to my bro Bionic Force for editing. (I made him make an account on Fimfiction because he wanted credit.)
Written as a secondary entry into the Transformations Body Swap Contest
Chapters (1)
*rubs chin*
You can stay.
I hope that's a typo.
Good stuff. I like.
Haha, that last sentence was funny.
well I must say I was confuse for most of the story
but I like it never the less, lots of laugh
saw your final coming a mile away I might say tho
so you can read both comedies and feels, mmmm
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4710226 hmm probably, you think its that good?
4711152 Yes.
4711420 Aww thank ya kindly. Yea ill try and submit it.
How much time did you put into writing this?
4786667 the entire thing? Or on a chapter by chapter basis?
4786673 This chapter. There is only the one, right?
4786681 lol oh sorry I thought I was on a different story. Let's see, I think that I came up with the idea because I didnt like the previous story. The next day I wrote out the synopsis for it (how I wanted to go) then when I couldn't think of an ending, I began writing, and came up with an ending while doing so. So all in all 3 days 1 for the synopsys, one for the chapter itself then the third for editing and proofreading it with Force
Oh, but she is.
We've got backpack to do.
Inconsistencies.
colon
It's actually not. Less than 6,000.
I liked it quite a bit; 'twas creative. Thumbs up.
I want to see the full Flim Flam Bros song though... I keep wondering what rhymes with trope that could be relevant to the story.
4787158 Ahh thanks I must've added that colon by accident when I was sorting out the spacing issues
4787212 Thank you for fixing it! It's rewarding to see an author take my edits seriously. One more thing though, is Luna allowed to facehoof in Spike's body? One more other thing, what rhymes with trope? Will we ever know?
4787239 Technically? No. Physically? Still no, In her mind? It's still a facehoof. But, two nos and a yes, means yes
"Well you see now, Sparkle, there’s a common little trope,” Flim sang in a fast paced beat.
"There’s a time in every life, when we all tend to think and hope,
"To wonder and see, what's like to be me-"
"Or me,
"Or you," Flim sang, pointing over at Spike.
Flam copied with Twilight. "Or sheee~!"
4787386 I love it! Thank you.
4787453 NP I hope that I get to use the flimflams in another story, they were fun to write
4787594 I think you did a good job with it, they seem totally authentic.
4691265 Wait, there is No Way you saw that ending from a mile away!
This story. Oh my gosh. I never thought I could laugh that hard.
Tears of laughter
Best part XDDD