We might even make it through this war, I think!
Changelings feed on love, emotions...so why take it by force? A certain Changeling thought, so he branched off long ago along with others who agreed with him and formed a new hive....right below Ponyville.
Tags will be updated appropriately...
...Written for the Dawws...I think.
Also hugs....HUGS FOR EVERYONE...AND CHEESE....cool, right?
Cover art by Zutcha, Picture sourced....all ya gotta do is click it.
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It made sense until the last half chapter
Then things became a little choppy.
Not bad though, and if you could create/write a story for the intervening 5 years, it would be greatly appreciated.
7/10
~~Flutter-Shy~~
Interesting, shall follow it.
However, the story is highly discontinuous, I felt like I was reading random moments from the scenario than a sound fic. While it may be appropriate for events like changeling invasion for it gives story an "action-packed" look, seeing it this early into story with almost no character introduction discourages from giving story a chance. It can also induce a thought of author wanting to skip right into action in the reader, furthermore dampening interest in the story.
this is so cute causing me to squee and i squeed so hard my head explodonated
Add random tag because its practically random jump from one event to another sometimes completly without any continuation. Over all idea is not bad but first its dramatically short second its way to random third practically no descriptions
4665997 ...Did you really just reference the Cherry Bomb from Plants vs. Zombies? I am not sure whether proud, or sad.
I'd like to say thanks for all the constructive criticism, and I will work on changing this for the better, as well as make a chapter for the missing time.
That... was spooky. I know about Psycho Mantis, so...
Heh heh. You'll get a kick out of this. As I read this, I have a Skyrim Let's Play open in the other tab. So I read to the bottom, and I was like
4669227 WHAT!? REALLY? ...excuse me, I have to go to the nearest corner and laugh myself into a coma now...thank you...so, so much.
4669716 'Twas my pleasure, sir.
Good start so far. I'd suggest slowing things down to get to know the characters a bit before going all save the world mode.
I'd say right now my favorite Cuddlebug is Harmonize, since he came up with such a cool term for his hive
4669917 Thanks, but there not saving the world, It's listed at slice-a-life, so most of the story is just their lives, but...i forgot what i was gonna type...anyway, have a nice day!
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I meant when they were trying to help the ponies from the other hive attacking; the whole wearing capes and spandex suits was metaphorical
4670474 oh...I derped, but the whole protection thing was a thing (moral) about sticking to your beliefs...though now I'm imagining changelings in the form of superheroes...I'm batman!
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Super Cuddle Bugs will get the MOST hugs!
Damn, Mantis has to be the most awesome Cuddlebug Yet!
Tiny!
Also!
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! OMG ALL THEM POOR CUDDLE BUGS?! WILL THEY BE HARMED?! WILL THEY BE AWESOME?! WHATS HAPPPPPPPENNNINGGGGG!!!!
This story is so damn random and so damn weird that it has earned my like and favorite.
Also, I think my favorite cuddlebug is transmute, him or Tailor.
Ha, a grizzled veteran of celestia-knows-how-many campaigns calling himself a cuddle bug... It's like soldierxderpy shipping, it's so out of character that it's funny to the point of adorability.
So,so far we have tiny from dota, psycho mantis from metal gear and the announcer from halo reaches firefight... The only thing missing here is either glados or a certain tactical genius tha-
CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!
...Where's the damn conga? Also, you promised feels and cuddles, and I have yet to see either, and that makes me sad. Do you want me to be sad?
4702040 Well... You are half Weeping Angel....
4702040 all in good time, all in good time...have to kill continuity errors first
With fire.
Also I promised cheese...I owe you all that.
4702786 Sir or Madam, please do some research before you make half-assed assumptions and jokes. I did NOT choose this name on a whim; look at my user page and some earlier blog posts. Thank you for your time.
How do cuddle bugs fight? By cuddling?
4711275 ...maybe?
Poor Transmute, I hope he survives
lol the whole pretend to be a dude was FTW in this chapter.
Transmute you.... You lucky buck!
4728955 well I forget is a crushed pelvis lethal... if not well he'll live ... though
if they can make a functional metal replacement for his pelvis is unknown or if he can handle that many mares or risk of that large a herd
umm... an
insaneinsaner?...?? version of pinkey.... sure.... PREPARE THE MEGASPELLS AND THE BUNKER WE MUST ESCAPE NOW4741177 the megaspells are ready captain, firing when ready
MY BODY HAS CONTRACTED EARLY DIABEDUS!
Hi, interesting cover image you have there.
Seriously, it's as if I've seen it somewhere before...
5455574 ok, sorry for the long response time, computer problems; anyway, sorry I forgot to credit you, I sourced it, but didn't write it in. I kinda write at the worst of times.....like in the early AM, Can ya find it in your heart to forgive this poor soul?
5499736 It's fine.
Cuddlebugs. huh? I can only see silly things from here on. Let us proceed!
4711275
Biting like a mosquito, but they drain the magic from you instead of blood.
4702040
You want Conga?!
click. Youtube button doesn't work for me here.
5949289 Do you have any idea... ANY idea who I am?
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For some reason I can't help but imagining cuddling with Prince Philip
I just realized, is 42nd hive a reference to the answer to the universe and everythinf?