Twilight is given the ultimate task, which may be harder than she thought. Princess Celestia has sent her an unconscious Changeling that was found in the outskirts of Equestria after the Chrysalis attack on Canterlot. Her main test is to try and learn about the Changeling as much as possible. However, things start to get a little bit complicated as she learns more about them, and might even form a bond between the two.
Authors Note:
As of January 6, 2018, I am officially cancelling this fanfiction. It's been a fun ride from the years, but it's quite obvious that I lost interest in remotely writing this. Thank you all for the support and critique to help me grow as a writer! If I ever, for whatever reason, gain my spark to write this again, then I shall! Again, thank you everyone for the support.
Until then;
RebelliousBrony
Complete and udder darkness.
Utter* Although I like to imagine the room was filled with shadow cows now XD
5693648 We all know that shadow cows are the best cows!
I still like this story but the one thing you wanna avoid doing is having him give in too soon or it'll feel rushed
5694252 Don't worry, it won't be THAT rushed. You'll see as I develop more chapters.
5706244 cool I'll be waiting for that update
Glad to see this updated. Looking forward to the next one.
There is no reason for panic. You still can fix this Twilight. ... PANIC!!!
I'm really liking the direction you are taking this. I also enjoy how it is not mainly focused on the changeling.
XD
Is this going to get updated? Or is it on hiatus? I've found it to be somewhat enjoyable and I wish to see how thing will go. I wish thee good luck.
6712187 Heyooo, surprise! I'm actually not dead! But to answer your question, it's on a "cancelled-hiatus" kind of mode. I kind of lost interest in continuing the story, but who knows? I might pick it up again at some point. I have ideas in mind, but I just haven't had the inspiration. With school and what not, it's been kind of hard to focus on other things. Will I return to this story? Maybe in the near future! Keep an eye out, and there might be another chapter!
Switching between Twilight and the changeling's perspective is a bit disorienting for me... There are also some things that we don't need explained. "He tried to move a hoof, but it proved no use. Casually looking over, he saw that his hole-filled hooves have been strapped down by some chains." Those sentences are a bit awkward—I'd rephrase it to something like: "As he tried to get up, he felt a tug on his legs. Chains were looped through his leg-holes, securing him down to the table." "it proved no use" sounds awkward—I don't think you's say that in real life...
I'm interested to see where this goes.