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Theevina


Brony since 2011. I like writing. I also do other stuff.

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Twilight Sparkle has always been proud to be Celestia's favorite student. But how will she find this long-lost remnant of the princess's childhood? And how will she be able to put up with him?

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Lol whut? :derpytongue2:
I think this story has the potential to be amazing :pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh:

SHE is a neurotic librarian with a crush on her teacher!
HE is an antedeluvian spirit of chaos and egoism who likes chocolate milk!
Together, they fight crime!

This could be really funny, I'll wait and see. :) Watch the misspellings a little, though.

I see potential...
I also see Trollestia, Crazy Sparkles, and an underlying Dis-cordial plot

Sorry for the shortness of the chapter, but I was excited to release it. :rainbowlaugh:

Hopefully in the future, they'll begin to get longer and more detailed.

Helz yeah exactly the type of story I love!:pinkiehappy:

I like where this is going. Looking forward to future installments.

I simply don't understand the plot, but whatever it's a good story anyway

I love these kind of stories. They always have something up their sleeves. :rainbowkiss:

Chapter 3 Author Commentary

I think I'll do a commentary post for each new chapter starting now. I'm sorry for the lateness, but I was having trouble figuring out how to make this chapter not sound bad. It's also the longest one so far (but still not very long compared to the chapters in other stories). The crazy dialog exchange between Twilight and Discord continues. She doesn't trust him and is still wondering why she had to go with him. He is more cheerful and optimistic and Twilight doesn't seem to understand that. Also, he seems strangely confident that they will one day become friends (even after what he's done in the past). Will this ever happen? Only time will tell.

I think it's a little silly that Twilight can lift an ursa minor, make wings, and pick a hundred apples at once but can't cast a spell like lumos or something.

This is really good. I love this fic.:heart::rainbowkiss:

what the high unholy discord!?:twilightoops:

....hes planning something....i just know it. and when it happens...i will most likely laugh.

Non Grimdark/Grimlight/Dark/Clopfic Fanon = Canon until proven wrong.

At least that's how i see it.

The next chapter is coming tomorrow. It's called "Set Sail For Chaos".

Chapter 4 Author Commentary

I've always wanted to have a scene in my story that takes place at an ocean, because there haven't been any large bodies of water seen in the show and I though it would be nice to try something different for a change. Their patience with each other is waning so who knows what will eventually happen? How long is it going to take them to find that goose? Be prepared, the next chapter will likely be the longest and most action packed one so far.

Fantastic, can't wait for the next part. Quite enjoying this one. =]

Chapter 5 Author Commentary

I was looking forward to this chapter since I began the story. The island scene was sort of inspired by the one from The Pirates Who Don't Do Anything. Except in my story they encounter snortles rather than angry cheese puffs. (And yes, I did have to make that Portal joke.) So where could they go next that could possibly be crazier than that? Why does the princess always agree with Discord? What was that dusty gem? The world may never know. (Ha ha. But you might eventually find out whenever I get enough motivation to write the next chapters.)

OH MY GOD
I LAUGHED SO HARD AT 'Now you're thinking with snortles,'
OH GOSH
EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO GET MY LUNGS FIXED
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Heh, gave me a pretty good laugh with the Snortle joke


-Sincerly
Baron Discornius, Ruler of the Maelstrom

oh discord you wonderfull bastard! you make anything fun

If anyone is wondering when the next chapter is coming, then here is my poor excuse. :facehoof: I was having writer's block with a tiny boring part that should have only been a paragraph or so, but I wasn't going to be satisfied with it so I just quit for a while. :derpyderp1: I spent the last couple days making a new fansite for the show. I will have the new chapter out Tuesday or Wednesday, ok? :applejackunsure:

Chapter 6 Author Commentary

This chapter is a little... different. And I'm sorry it took so long. I think we might be half way through the story now (maybe, idk). Since adding the random tag to the story ('cause Discord is random all the time) I feel like I have more freedom to insert memes and stupid jokes. But the funny things is that somehow, Twilight is becoming more tolerant of him.

ADVENTURE! :rainbowlaugh:

Now that is a great way to end a chapter. I quite enjoyed it.

:pinkiegasp: Nyan Cat, noooooooooooo!!!
:fluttercry:

So many references and memes!
As far as I can predict, as long as this story goes anywhere within its current range of possibilities, it'll be awesome!

So he ate a gorilla? Even if it was a pastry that's kinda... Brutal? I believe that Twilight would be a deal more shocked and disgusted after seeing Discord kill/eat a sentinet being because he was mean.
Still loving this story :D

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Yeah, it was harsh, but the story is supposed to be strange and random. I had to put the poptart in there somewhere, and I wanted that gorilla to get pwned. (Plus, he wasn't sentient as a poptart.)

ahem....ADVENTURE!
crap, now i have nyancat playing again.

Aggh...I can't stop thinking that the Gorilla has a rough New York accent

Woah, did I just step into meme world?
Loving this story, I can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

I still think it should have been
Discord "Twilight Grab me boob"
Twilight "Your What?" :twilightoops:

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This fic is rated "Everyone", the memes are not. :twilightsheepish:

Oh, I really want to release the next chapter before Thanksgiving, but I'm too busy working on a gazillion other projects that will probably ultimately fail like everything else I do.

Today I learned something. Making custom maps for Portal 2 is very hard... :facehoof:

So far a very enjoyable, lighthearted story.
The chapters feel a bit short, but that's where my issues with the story end. :)

So far a solid 5/5 from me.

Looking forward to the next update!

So I am now working on a full Portal mod and it has distracted me from everything else. On top of that, I began a fansite (mentioned in a comment earlier) for MLP:FiM and I tried to get it endorsed by Seth from EqD or someone else there. But after sending three emails over about a two week period I haven’t received a single response, not even in my spam folder. It upset me because it felt kind of rude that they didn’t even put it in a nightly roundup or send a rejection response, but that’s ok (because most of my projects end up failing and I am working on too many other things right now already. (My random rants might be longer than some short stories I write, but anyway, I'll stop here.) :twilightangry2:

So please hang on tight for a couple more days until I can get over frustration and writers block to finish the next chapter. I already know how the story will end, but this particular chapter is probably going to be the hardest because there isn't much to write on this scene. :applejackunsure:

Chapter 7 Author Commentary

This if the image that partially inspired this chapter. It was posted on EqD but I don't remember who made it. :twilightsmile:

This chapter was hard to write because I don't like making the pace so quick, but I couldn't think of enough details to put into the climbing scene so I had to wing it. (And I couldn't combine it with the next chapter because it is complex enough on its own) The next chapter will probably be a lot more interesting. Anyway, the relationship between the two characters is evolving. It should be interesting to see how the readers will react to it.

To the people who post comments, thank you! It is the driving force that motivates me to keep writing.

42548 Are you hinting that this will turn into umm... Twicord..? I am not sure if they were shipped yet.
And honestly - as long as it is written well - anything can work.

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If you really want to know...

HIGHLIGHT SPOILER BELOW
The next chapter will probably be the the climax of the Twilight/Discord relationship. It will contain light shipping. It will still clean enough for an everyone rating and not enough to give this story a romance tag.

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This chapter does feel kinda short...

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My reaction to the spoiler (in words) below. Highlight it to read, assuming this works correctly...
I'm attempting to express my sadness without using an internet meme. So far, there are no TwiXDiscord fics that aren't grimdark or onesided.

Chapter 8 Author Commentary

Friendshipping > Shipping :yay:

If you're looking for serious clop, you won't find it here. But I hope this chapter was enough to satisfy you people. Anyway, I was looking forward to writing this for a long time. The tent is sort of a double reference to Doctor Who (bigger on the inside) and Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire (which towards the beginning has a tent just like this). Things will just be getting better from here. If you think you know where this story is going, I'm pretty sure that you probably don't. I hope to have the story finished by Christmas. :twilightsmile:

All I can say is... Daaaawwww :pinkiesad2:

After reading this chapter I've decided that I'll do horrible things to you if the story won't have a happy ending. :pinkiecrazy:

Discord deserves some happiness.

this chapter isnt funny at all

:/

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :heart: Do I see some DisSparkle coming on here? :twilightsmile:

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Should I be scared? :pinkiegasp: No really, the ending will be fantastic. In fact, I think I'm better at writing endings than the main storylines. :twilightblush:

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Yeah, it's a little serious from here. But there will still be some humor occasionally. :rainbowlaugh:

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That's the end of the (friend)shipping... mostly. :applejackunsure:

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And the Crocodile devours friendship so all that is left to write about it SHIPPING :yay:

IT was GOOOD. Total twist. And now Twilight has confirmed that she will continue to try her best to act crazy and chaotic.

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Best not be trolling

Feren: All we want is a happy ending
Theevina: Sure a happy ending
Feren: Yay
Theevina: THIS SHALL RIVAL CUPCAKES MUHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH

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Damn it... Now I got mental images of Lesson Zero Twilight doing horrible things to Discord :rainbowderp:

so...many....memes!!!!!

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