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Apple Bloom is overcome with emotion. A simple slip of the tongue in front of one of Applejack's friends leaves her wondering how to deal with this sort of embarrassment. Will she be able to face her fears? Or will she keep her feelings bottled up inside of her, as long as she can avoid telling anyone about her little slip up?
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Please do make a Spike side story
And I'm happy to see the update
Wonderful chapter
looking pretty awesome
Ok I'm confused. Did you re-post these chapters or something? If so, did you re write parts?
Just asking so I know if I need to reread them or not.
6271382 The chapters have all been edited to look better then they did before. So, yes, there are some changes, but the story is still the same.
Great chapter can't wait to read more
6314424 Thanks for the comment, unfortunately Mum's the Word will be put on a long hiatus sometime soon as I plan on working on another fanfic.
6314605 why r all the stories I read put on hold
6314625 Not to worry the next fanfic I'm working on is another Twilight & Apple Bloom story! hope you look forward to it.
6314715 cool can't wait
I read the first couple of dialogue,
If the sentence leads into an action, the sentence is to be ended with a comma.
Same here. It is good that you don't capitalize the letter after the dialogue, but the 'point' needs to become a comma.
Note: I am not an editor. I was curious as to your post in the feed.
I think I understand the importance of including Spike's interaction. Are you framing the idea that Twilight actually is somewhat a mother figure?
6689312 Exactly.
Great story looking forward to the next one and if they will eventually meet up she won't be able to avoid her forever but I can not wait to see what happens then as well as if Twilight will eventually adopt Apple Bloom. Hope so.
Can't wait to see where this leads!!
Your*
AAAAAAW
After reading "My Wings Will Keep You Safe" I was so excited to discover this story about Twilight being the perfect mother figure for Applebloom, it's a shame that its been on hiatus for over 2 years. Hopefully Astral, you'll one day return to this story cuz the potential is there.
8709604 Thank you for the kind words.
you will be happy to know that I am in the planning process of remaking this story. I will be posting a blog giving more details on it sometime soon so keep your eyes peeled for it. 
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Oh my, can't wait!
little did anyone one know their would never be a chapter 4
8774349 Sadly no, but there will be a remake coming very soon.
8774424
i see lets hope it last more then 3 chapters
8774424
Is the remake there?
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No, haven't gotten around on the remake and probably won't be able to for some time. My current focus is on "Twins at the Beach" an EqG fanfic and my main project, Rise of the Apple Princess, the latter is also a remake.
Really good story