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wille179


I write stories so that I won't be kept awake at night with a brain full of ponies.

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The world was literally falling apart around them. Mountains drifted off into the sky, rivers tied themselves into knots, and hideous monsters ravaged the scattered remains of ponykind. At least the unicorn named Twilight Sparkle had her friends, right? Well, no. You see, they all were separated while they were sleeping when the ground split, carrying each them thousands of miles apart in a single night.

A week after losing her friends, Twilight Sparkle woke up with a strange affliction: she was hearing voices in her head. At first, they were merely having idle conversation; they didn't talk to her and didn't acknowledge her, and thus were easy to ignore. But then, as Twilight searched for her friends, she realized that if enough of the voices agreed upon something, they could alter reality itself to get what they wanted.

Then YOU came along and spoke to Twilight. YOU are the collective voices that have recognized her and decided to aid Twilight Sparkle in her journey to rescue her friends and save the world. But beware, the powerful THEM seeks to destroy the world and see Twilight suffer for all eternity.

Are YOU ready?


Inspired by "Twitch Plays Pokemon."

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 138 )

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HAHAHAHA! That's exactly what I was going to do!

start9

Remember all magic then summon food and water

The comments dictate Twilight's fate, huh?

She gets hit by a bus.

Fuck You and

And I want Twilight to stick a sharpie in her ass while holding a paper with todays current date (current date in her universe).

Twilight.
First thing you need to do, without a doubt, is find food, water, and shelter. The cabin might be good for the latter, so go check it out. Next, find a way to set up communication. If you can find other ponies, they will be invaluable. If you can set up a means of communication, DO NOT leave this island, unless it's a complete emergancy.

Options E and F Wait, we can warp reality?
summon a chocolate bar :D

4566904 what he/she said and gives her book with spells to summon allies from the planet cray (From the anime CFV)

Option F:
She finds a book that gives her the powers of Plastic Man. She won't know how to use them, but she could learn.

Comment posted by Pogmin deleted Jun 18th, 2014

Twilight? Can you here me Twi?
Okay. Great.
I'm not sure if you heard all that about US and THEM, but yourself and the two groups all exist in different realities. We have used you as a sort of link between them using a powerful tool known as the Internet. Although I speak on the behalf of US, I am not permitted to give much information about the matter.
WE will be giving you advice, (And the occasional cookie.) to assist you in your adventure. You carry more importance than you know.
All of US wish you luck.
~Senya

To General Wille.
Can we refer to US and THEM as something more specific? It'll probably get poor Twilight Sparkle confused.

Huh. Interesting experiment. You certainly have piqued my curiosity. :ajsmug:

Alright, Twi. Here's what I want you to do. I realize you're very tense right now due to losing your magic. First, you must relax. I heard the best way to do that is to pause a few times in rapid succession. About nine times should do the trick.

After that's done, I recommend exploring the cabin. If it's abandoned, use it as your base of operations. If it isn't, perhaps whoever dwells within can help you on your quest. Oh, and be sure to look out for ledges. Trust me, they will be the bane of your existence if you're not careful.

OpTiOn F: It WaS cOlD iN tHe CaVe. SeT fIrE tO tHe AiRsHiP sAiL fOr WaRmTh. Well, now I feel like a moron.
Option A then. Looked too much into meanings that weren't there.

/edit

My my, this sounds like quite the bit of work set dear author. I'm excited for this, but also worried the work might become too much at some point. At which moment, this story is banished to the eternal pits of incompletion and abandonment.

Really, I've found once a task has become to feel like a needless chore, it's only downhill.
But maybe some way to get others to do the more menial tasks may be an option once the story were to reach a certain point? Ah well, that's far in the future for now. Onwards to glorious madness!

Option E: Find food and water.
Of course, she should only do this if she was in the cave for a good long while. If not, I wanna learn more about airships!

TWILIGHT! Trixie's better at magic than you now. :rainbowlaugh:

Guys, you can't blindly give in options. Think ahead. It mentioned how there could be monsters patrolling the sky due to Discord. Trying to leave would be risky. Exploring the island could be helpful, but you must acknowledge the possibility of someone else being there to search the cabin and/or airship. Considering finding food and water would be useful on the surface, once again, think. That could lead to unknown threats. If I were you, Twilight, I'd stay back to search the cabin, but keep a careful eye around you. Not the airship, for something could happen and next thing you know it falls apart and crashes off the island.

Also, in the cabin, she finds an easy-to-learn spell book which teaches her the Kamehameha!

1.food and water
2 fire wood
3 find a book explaning humen terms and internet memes to aviod futher confusion
4. summon Bird Jesus

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YOU (first-person) is all the bronies. THEM (third-person) is a character of mine. Thus everyone in the comments is YOU. YOU is also a non-diagetic term, meaning that if you belonged to THEM, the pronouns would be reversed. Does that help?

Okay, Twilight, I hope you know you're at the mercy of two opposing groups. I suggest you try your best to make it so the good group can help you. We, teh good group, can help you get out of this alright. However, you may be subject to torture if they somehow get you to do something.
I'm about to give you to most vital piece of information I can, alright?
Go right.

F: Inspect: Self
Remember: Basic Logic
Use: Basic Logic

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Unfortunately, Twilight cannot resist YOUR or THEIR influence, so "Basic Logic" might not happen...

4567788 how did you do the color thing to only 1 word?
I can only get it to color the whole line... and only that line.

A: Investigate the cabin and look for a book about anything that would help you survive.(most likely self-defence)

I would also like to ask the authour something. Will the story be in American, Australian, British, or Canadian English?

First, food and water, then, investigate cabin for useful spells. Explore the island as you look for food, m'kay, Twi? Also, aliens are watching you...

~Anita

So, well, I'd suggest looking in that cabin. You don't know what you'll find in there. Then, once you find materials, fix the broken airship.

~White Starr
P.S.: The choice is yours and yours alone...

4567892
Use the [color=#be4343] color [/color] tags around the word you want. The six letters/numbers after the # are the hex code for that particular color.

4567938
American English, to the best of my ability.

Option f: discover then consult our savior, Lord Helix Fossil.

First, Twi, lemme tell ya, like a previous voice stated, WE wish you the best of luck and WE will try to help in the best way possible. With that said, wE will also put you through Tartarus for OuR own amusement. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry.

At any rate...

*ANARCHY*

Explore the river where you will pass out (because you can't swim). When you awake, you will be alone in the lair of The Rotten. With only a spoon, a broken broadsword, and your wits, you must defeat it. After defeating it, you will absorb it soul, causing you to grow to the size of a dragon, only to be immediately slain by a Brave Undead. but you shall awake (normal sized) only to discover you now have the Undead Curse and are slowly going Hollow.

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You've jumped the gun on the anarchy thing. We're still in Democracy and won't get anarchy until at some point when Twilight meets Discord.

B! Airship! Not for any good reason, I just love airships.

Oh, since there are monsters in the air, you're gonna need some sort of weapon. Look around you, can you construct some sort of rudimentary lathe?

Why are people down-voting this? This sounds like a great fun.

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Ugly looking first chapter, I bet. They just need to wait.

Ok Twilight, about your lost magic... I don't think its truly 'lost' more likely its locked away in your mind, you just need the right 'key'.
The 'key' will probably be seeing somepony do a spell you've 'lost' and you'll remember it, same thing about books about said spells, so it will be like an 'instant-master' effect!

Now investigate the cabin, then see if you can find food and water.

we are here for you, be strong Twilight.

They declare that if Twilight does not go to the airship it will crumble into the water below just as she chooses something else!

I say that Twilight should start with the basics. Option 5, find food and water.:pinkiehappy:

She will "hear" every comment posted, so keep it PG and don't post stupid things, lest ye be insulted by Twilight Snarkle.

Snarkle? Can you hear me? Hello! I think you should find food and water. Those are very important in any kind of survival.

Attempt to teleport but axeadentaly turn yourself to a foal
Read last comment by me to understand why she knows advanced magic

Food and water is a requirement. So do a little search near the river, and spread out to 50 meters in diameter. There maybe a bush with edible leaves and some berries and a dip in the river allowing her to gather water.

Also, keep her calm. She's smart, but when she goes off. She can do grievous harm.

All the while have a holographic boom box that appears and disappears after the song. Explain to twilight, it helps set the mood and have it play this song. Plus she gets to hear some good music along the way. So enjoy it.

:yay::twilightblush:

4571077 You might be able to find a way off the island.

C: and remember teleportation from the helix fossil

First she must contemplate, then eat, then find the old dude.

Option A seems to be the safest. You might also fix some gear in the cabin, like binoculars.:pinkiehappy:

GUYS WE NEED TO MILK TRIXIE

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